Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently.
Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.
Many narrator believe that it is better for grandparents to live besides their children, whereas others support the opposite idea that older individuals should be provoke to have separate live. This essay discuss both sides of this argument and my own perspective will be presented at the end.
On the one side of the argument there are people who think living with the children in the form of one family is more appropriate for old people. The main reason of them is related to the importance of the supportive role which each member in the family could be played to overcome the difficulties. In fact, elderly people are more vulnerable against the routine hardship which increase their demand to asset by younger family member. Another reason is the positive impacts of grandparent's presence to help their children for upbringing the grandchildren. For instance, both parents usually work in today's family and it will cause many problem to keep the children. The grandparents are the best option to care of children in this case. Moreover, some routine daily tasks such as cooking can be done by them.
On the other hand, some people believe in the advantages of living the elderly people alone. Their idea is based on the necessity of increasing of fulfillment in older people and preventing of arguments between family members. Generally, increasing the confidence in old people via encouraging them to live separately will lead to sense of fulfilment that is necessary for them and will be followed with more life expectancy. Furthermore, older people have their own ideas that may be in contrast of new generation. If they live with their children it would be more possible to conflict with them in numerous aspects because of the difference of attitudes.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I feel that when grandparents live with their children is more beneficial because of their need to take care and being beneficial for children by helping them to keep the babies and doing some housework.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'provoked'?
Suggestion: provoked
...e idea that older individuals should be provoke to have separate live. This essay discu...
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Suggestion: discusses
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...work in todays family and it will cause many problem to keep the children. The grandparents ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0146627566 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71576102945 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504398826979 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8017344096 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371241996628 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123935451195 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637931983234 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245069185387 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345894497525 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.