Music and other arts seem to be features of every society.
In what ways are music and other arts important for societies and for individuals?
It is argued that music and art are integral components of any country on this planet. This idea is indisputable because they are an outlet for an individual’s creativity and a means of uniting people of the same origin.
On an individual level, music and art are an effective form of communication. It has been known for centuries that humans have been producing various works of art, such as symphonies or paintings to communicate a wide range of emotions or inner thoughts to others on a deeper level that can transcend language barriers. To illustrate, it is not unusual to witness people from diverse cultures utilizing a piece of romantic music to express their affections to their lovers, regardless of whether the recipients can fully comprehend the lyrics, as the melody itself effectively conveys the intended messages.
As for a societal context, music and art are also contributing factors for social cohesion. Cultural features, such as national costumes or ethos, are often incorporated into a traditional dance and a folklore to imbue younger generations with the distinctive values of their country which can strengthen the bonds between them and their ancestors. In fact, this way of employing arts to foster national solidarity is evident in Vietnam where young students are taught to develop the same national identity through traditional songs and history lessons. Although this teaching approach might not always achieve the desired outcome due to varying individual perspectives, it has, to a considerable extent, demonstrated success in fostering a unified society.
In conclusion, not only have music and art been playing a vital role in personal interactions due to their universal appeal but also in shaping a country through highlighting shared values binding the people.
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- One long distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years time but they cause the same amount of pollution So some people think that we should discourage non essential flights such as tourist travel rather than to limit the use of cars To w 89
- Some people believe women make better leaders than men in companies or government To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- as well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities to what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities Discuss both views and give your opinions 89
- People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, as for, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33566433566 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98275316951 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611888111888 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2575947565 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.6 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234677320537 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987762029321 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772825759578 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134777883889 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309254322097 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.