The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly accepted that the only solution to enhance road safety is to strictly punish reckless drivers. However, I believe that there are other measures that are also effective in ensuring road safety.
It is stark that harsher punishments on careless drivers is the only way to improve road safety. One of the good results is reducing the traffic accident rates. This is simply because stringent punishments can make the driver be in fear when they have to spend a large amount of money for the punishment. This leads to the situation that the citizen will reduce speed when they drive.
Doubtless, not only using stricter rules to enhance the safety of our roads but also there are still other effective approaches to take. First and foremost, the government should spend money improving the quality of roads in order to avoid road casualties. This assertion is supported by the fact that steep roads with sharp curves in the remote areas will cause danger for the drivers as a result accidents frequently occur in these areas. In addition, the government should arrange the patrol police on the empty road to punish driving offenses. This can be explained by the fact that the driver will be afraid to be fined money and confiscated their driver license when they are arrested by the police. This makes the citizen drive carefully.
In conclusion, I believe that stricter punishments are not the only way to deal with driving offenses. Other strategies such as improving the quality of road and arranging the patrol police on the empty road can also contribute to maintain road safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91851851852 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46839001083 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3608984728 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235157249475 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965345803452 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790889764728 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169198055317 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445318337727 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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