Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Task1.
It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? (28)
Without risk no one can progress. Actually, risk plays a crucial role in both professional and personal people’s lives. In my opinion, although taking risk has lots of benefit it has many intense harmful.
On the one hand, every person should take risk in his/her personal life. A person who has not courage to do risk is very weak and coward because taking risks gives lots of opportunities to improve quality of people life and their career. For example, when a person invests on super expensive apartment in fact, he equivalents all of his/her life but if he/she can sell it gain much money and can extremely better his/her life. In professional aspects not only he/she learn how to trade and business boy others but also this cause improve communication skills.
On the other hand, when people fail in their risks depend on level of risk its harmful can has effect on lives people. It makes people have become depressed or even some times heart attack. If people do risk without any plan they always fail. For example, someone who allocate all of his/her money in gambling surely loss of them. Not only does loss all money but also loss every thing who has in life such as wife, house, car and etc. hence, although take risks has numerous advantages always should be careful to do it sensible.
In conclusion, people of a society always like to take risks because its benefits are a lot of but they should notice this point that it might harmful effects if fail.
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? (25)
By growing the technology and present of smart phones people use it a lot daily. In fact, using them has become part of daily lives. Particularly new generation spent most of their times with smart phones. In my opinion, there are several different reasons which children have tendency to use them, therefore if children would be improving their knowledge and skills it is positive otherwise is negative.
Using smart phones has become an integral part of people of every society without considering their ages. Hence, developing technology, and internet would be having a lot of effects on people lives. Children like to play online games which these phones presented it. These games make children addict by it and spent most of their daily times with playing. In long term causes pain in eyesight, has a very negative effects on brain. for example, a child who play online every day gets a nervous tic. So, parents have a crucial role to manage this problem by controlling their time.
Another point is impact on their behavior and personality character. In many cases children who allocate most of their times to play games are introvert persons. This would be affected on their future. An introvert person cannot have any communication with others and it cause depression and many other diseases. not only, waste of time but also, they waste this opportunity to learn beneficial subjects.
Finally, parents can teach their children to convert this big threat to a good opportunity to learn useful subjects such as programming and make money from it. not only they can improve their skills in a practical subject but also, they can gain much money in their teenagerhood.
In conclusion, undoubtably children spent most of their times by smart phones but it depends on how use smart phones whether improve individual skills or waste of the time.
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (46)
Almost all countries allow their professionals either work in their countries or work abroad. So according to some, it is important that a specialist work for his/her native county because this make develop the nation but some else believe that they have this chance to opt work locations. In my opinion, government should provide a good situation for their professionals to stay in their countries.
Immigration of literate people has become a tremendous problem in many of countries. It happens because of lack of a good work situation, job security, not paying attention to experts. Hence, lots of experts prefer to select a suitable country destination to accommodation and work. They should be free to work in another country because of these problems. An important thing about other countries is their languages that every person who immigrate their have to learn for communication. Therefore, the point of selecting other countries instead of native country for work is lack of attention from governments.
Another point is some professionals prefer to stay in their countries and progress it. they have a high sense of responsibility because of their background. Not only they have the sense of pay doubt to government but also the experts would like to recreate the infrastructures. In such country if governments valuable to their engineers and doctors promote rapidly. one of the most effective points is the cash flow stay in the country.
In conclusion, every person loves work in own country, and depends on several different factors that mentioned above prefer to work in another country. I think staying in native country is more valuable.
- The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 56
- In many countries people are now living longer than ever before Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people To what extent do the advantages of having an ag 73
- the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make 73
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 373, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gains'?
Suggestion: gains
... his/her life but if he/she can sell it gain much money and can extremely better his...
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Line 4, column 468, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...In professional aspects not only he/she learn how to trade and business boy others bu...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...ople have become depressed or even some times heart attack. If people do risk without...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ressed or even some times heart attack. If people do risk without any plan they al...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ho has in life such as wife, house, car and etc. hence, although take risks has numerous...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9 Some children spend hours every day on t...
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Line 10, column 232, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
... smart phones. In my opinion, there are several different reasons which children have tendency to...
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Line 11, column 415, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...s pain in eyesight, has a very negative effects on brain. for example, a child who play...
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Line 11, column 433, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
..., has a very negative effects on brain. for example, a child who play online every ...
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Line 12, column 272, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...ve any communication with others and it cause depression and many other diseases. not...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
...use depression and many other diseases. not only, waste of time but also, they wast...
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Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9 Some people believe that professionals, ...
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Line 18, column 233, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...s make develop the nation but some else believe that they have this chance to opt work ...
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Line 20, column 366, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... engineers and doctors promote rapidly. one of the most effective points is the cas...
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Line 20, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tive points is the cash flow stay in the country. In conclusion, every person lo...
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Line 21, column 71, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...ves work in own country, and depends on several different factors that mentioned above prefer to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, hence, if, so, therefore, even so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in many cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 34.0 10.4138276553 326% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 102.0 24.0651302605 424% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 129.0 41.998997996 307% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4734.0 1615.20841683 293% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 957.0 315.596192385 303% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94670846395 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.56196157812 4.20363070211 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63486041904 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 373.0 176.041082164 212% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389759665622 0.561755894193 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1452.6 506.74238477 287% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 15.0 4.76152304609 315% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 57.0 16.0721442886 355% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8961329512 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0526315789 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9298245614 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 31.0 8.67935871743 357% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384030500445 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873318246449 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124631091807 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139003475261 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190311996854 0.056905535591 334% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 170.0 78.4519038076 217% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 373, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gains'?
Suggestion: gains
... his/her life but if he/she can sell it gain much money and can extremely better his...
^^^^
Line 4, column 468, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...In professional aspects not only he/she learn how to trade and business boy others bu...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...ople have become depressed or even some times heart attack. If people do risk without...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ressed or even some times heart attack. If people do risk without any plan they al...
^^
Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ho has in life such as wife, house, car and etc. hence, although take risks has numerous...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9 Some children spend hours every day on t...
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Line 10, column 232, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
... smart phones. In my opinion, there are several different reasons which children have tendency to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 415, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...s pain in eyesight, has a very negative effects on brain. for example, a child who play...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 433, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
..., has a very negative effects on brain. for example, a child who play online every ...
^^^
Line 12, column 272, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...ve any communication with others and it cause depression and many other diseases. not...
^^^^^
Line 12, column 314, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
...use depression and many other diseases. not only, waste of time but also, they wast...
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Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9 Some people believe that professionals, ...
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Line 18, column 233, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...s make develop the nation but some else believe that they have this chance to opt work ...
^^^^^^^
Line 20, column 366, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
... engineers and doctors promote rapidly. one of the most effective points is the cas...
^^^
Line 20, column 427, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tive points is the cash flow stay in the country. In conclusion, every person lo...
^^
Line 21, column 71, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...ves work in own country, and depends on several different factors that mentioned above prefer to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, hence, if, so, therefore, even so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in many cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 34.0 10.4138276553 326% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 102.0 24.0651302605 424% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 129.0 41.998997996 307% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4734.0 1615.20841683 293% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 957.0 315.596192385 303% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94670846395 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.56196157812 4.20363070211 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63486041904 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 373.0 176.041082164 212% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389759665622 0.561755894193 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1452.6 506.74238477 287% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 15.0 4.76152304609 315% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 57.0 16.0721442886 355% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8961329512 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0526315789 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9298245614 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 31.0 8.67935871743 357% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384030500445 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873318246449 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124631091807 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139003475261 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190311996854 0.056905535591 334% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 170.0 78.4519038076 217% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.