overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. what are some of these problems? how can governments and individuals tackle these problems?
In recent years, the population density upsurge has gradually been a concerning issue in the city center. This phenomenon causes several problems, namely environmental contamination and the increase of criminals. In this essay, I will clarify each problem as well as mention possible solutions to handle this issue.
The quality of the atmosphere becomes detrimental, which can be considered one of the most imperative problems currently. Indeed, in the densely populated areas, there witnessed an increasing number of private travel vehicles, which are not only causing traffic congestion but also releasing polluted air such as carbon dioxin into the atmosphere. To tackle this problem, a necessary solution is adopted that encourages inhabitants to utilize public transport to reduce their private vehicle usage. What's more, the government should invest a public budget in versatile and effective transport infrastructure in combination with proactively propagating people to raise their awareness of the responsibility while they are participating in traffic. As a result, in the foreseeable future, it can eliminate traffic jams and the effect of air pollution.
The other problem derived from this issue is the increase in society’s vice. To illustrate, numerous individuals poured into the metropolis with the expectation of seeking an advantageous job and a stable career ladder. Nevertheless, perhaps their qualifications and skills are not satisfying the employers’ aims for their organization, which creates a multitude of unemployment. This handicap results in several pessimistic people who can potentially pose a threat into the community by committing illegal actions such as thief and kidnapping. Therefore, one possible solution used to address it that is the government might create more job opportunities and good working conditions in the countryside for inhabitants to reduce the pressure of finding careers in overpopulated regions as well as distribute the population density between the metropolis and rural areas equally.
To conclude, although the population in the urban areas is mounting, which brings possibly several adverse outcomes, there is a variety of solutions that should be suggested, such as upgrading the public system, encouraging people to use public transport, and creating beneficial opportunities for people in the countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77840909091 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21174541738 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7072449528 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.285714286 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149006501289 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497022599327 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446165576532 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800256937655 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037076845972 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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