Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
The issue of transportation facilities has been brought into focus recently. It is common for government to spend money on investing in railway infrastructure and road networks. I partly agree with the idea that there are many advantages to construct railway stations, while we cannot ignore the significant impacts in building roads.
There are several reasons why creating railways is important in our life. Firstly, the speed of rail transport is faster than the road, which means that trains can transport more goods and people at the same time, thereby saving more time and cost. Secondly, building railways can improve the standard of living for people. This is because people can choose different kinds of vehicle to travel, for example, trains, highways and railways. These transportation make people go travel more convenient and improve human happiness. Lastly, building railway stations can improve the employment rate. The operation of railways requires a significant workforce to maintain and work, which means that it can provide more job opportunities, such as staff, cashier, driver etc.
However, it is clear that roads play a crucial role in our daily lives. Building roads can alleviate traffic congestion. This is because more roads enables the selection of other roads when this road is crowded, which can reduce the commuting time. Meanwhile, people are afforded greater opportunities for weekend travel to nearby cities. People can drive their cars to other cities instead of buying train tickets and enduring lengthy waits to reach their destination. Moreover, some underprivileged areas lack the means to develop railway infrastructure. In this situation, constructing roads is one of the most important ways to help them develop and stimulate the economic development. As the old saying goes in China, road can bring money, water can improve economy.
In conclusion, governments must balance investments in railway infrastructure with the consideration of the impacts of road development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can choose different kinds of vehicle to travel, for example, trains, highways an...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this transportation' or 'These transportations'?
Suggestion: This transportation; These transportations
...example, trains, highways and railways. These transportation make people go travel more convenient a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48717948718 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90511236332 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3208997167 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1052631579 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145060139017 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492827726044 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440953117768 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10382752952 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229260714877 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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