You recently moved to a big city and have decided to write to a friend from your neighborhood. Write a letter describing life in your new city and your feeling about the change.
Dear Hana,
Hi! How are you? It's taking so long to write because I have been busy settling in. Anyway, I thought I've dropped a line to let you know how I am getting on here.
I love this city - It is vibrant, modern, and dynamic. Although it always seems to be in a hurry, people are more friendly than I've expected.
Everything is fine except the prices. It would be unbelievable that my current house which is small and no garden costs me 3 times higher than that one in B-town. Food and essentials often available and diverse in mini-marts but they come with higher prices.
Another uncomfortable thing is traffic congestion. Unless the office is near your house, it can take you around an hour commuting to work. Fortunately, I've employed in a company located in my area, so that I avoid this matter.
I really miss my friends, especially you, Hana. I hope you will spend your spare time to come and see me here. I ensure that we will have a wonderful time.
I am waiting for hearing from you.
Love,
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In this vein, I'm putting…
In this vein, I'm putting pen to paper (or rather, fingers to keyboard) to critical thinking writing service write a letter to a friend back home. It's about adjusting to life in the big city after my recent move, and I want to share all the sights, sounds, and emotions of this new adventure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...een busy settling in. Anyway, I thought Ive dropped a line to let you know how I am...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... a hurry, people are more friendly than Ive expected. Everything is fine except th...
^^^
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...an hour commuting to work. Fortunately, Ive employed in a company located in my are...
^^^
Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our spare time to come and see me here. I ensure that we will have a wonderful ti...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re that we will have a wonderful time. I am waiting for hearing from you. Love,...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47567567568 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45949967041 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708108108108 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0670929206 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.2 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15190671539 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428935271472 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407626126505 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701527778031 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343057913504 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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