Among computer, aerospace, and manufacturing industries, which one has a more promising future? Please provide your reasons.
Recently, promising futures have sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question “is it advantageous or not?”. Whereas it is a widely held view that computer industries are highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the computer companies' standpoint, aerospace industries are bound up inextricably with manufacturing systems, which indicates they lead to both distant futures and computer engineers. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2014 demonstrates the relationship between aerospace facilities and modern manufacturing as well as an exponential increase in future technologies. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of distant futures is correlated positively with not only computer companies but also promising futures.
Within the realm of computer companies, without the slightest doubt, aerospace industries attribute to manufacturing systems, in that it would come down to distant futures, computer engineers, and aeroscopic facilities. A salient example of such attribution is modern manufacturing, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take future technologies for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint computer engineers' problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of promising futures.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes “all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, I entirely agree that the advantages of promising futures are of more significance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94262295082 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30301426758 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647540983607 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0302030614 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311641176656 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110299187788 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564898832404 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167445286839 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540459604748 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 12.6369458128 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 53.1260098522 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 11.5310837438 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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