Some people say that when deciding taxes, government should prioritize health care. Others think that there are more important priorities for tax-payers’ money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
When it comes to deciding how tax revenue should be allocated, people hold conflicting views centering around whether the authority should prioritize healthcare or focus on other pressing needs. Although there can be valid arguments for prioritizing taxpayers' money, I would argue that healthcare plays the most important role in our lives.
On the one hand, some argue that taxpayers’ money may take precedence over healthcare. One commonly cited consideration is ensuring national security and defense. For example, the substantial financial resources for military operations or emergency response systems to protect citizens and maintain stability. Another argument is that the government should invest in initiatives to stimulate economic growth, such as tax breaks for businesses so that there will be more jobs and boost consumer spending.
On the other hand, I firmly believe that healthcare should be a top consideration. First, ensuring access to quality healthcare is a moral imperative because every individual deserves the opportunity to have a healthy and fulfilling life. Second, boosting health is a long-term benefit for society as it improves productivity and reduces healthcare costs for everyone. As a result, we can mitigate the consequences of preventable diseases.
In conclusion, although it’s partly true that taxpayers’ money should be prioritized in some cases, I still agree with those who believe that the government should protect and promote the well-being of their citizens, and create a healthier and more prosperous society for all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65400843882 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0271784253 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654008438819 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1826961979 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.818181818 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247271851063 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782335745321 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679711285959 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14564452944 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589540439942 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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