Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
People have sparked a heated controversy over the influences of contemporary music genres on the youth. While its opponents highlight the drawbacks, I believe that music offers more remarkable benefits.
On the one hand, it is widely acknowledged that works of music exerts a number of negative impacts on adolescents. To begin with, songs with offensive lyrics, which incite hostility or distribute pornography, are witnessed to become widespread recently. The implication for this is that an exposure to such contents may shape the youth’s patterns of behavior, leading to a deviation in their lifestyle and threatening social orders. Secondly, another downside stems from their rhythms and melodies. In fact, as revealed by recent studies, listening to certain chords increases the willingness of harming themselves among young generations, reflected by more residents committing a suicide.
On the other hand, despite the aforementioned disadvantages, it seems to me that they are overwhelmed by the advantages. The initial reason is that most countries always implement censorships to eliminate any violation, so the majority of works in music industry are morally and aesthetically acceptable. If the youth are educated to sense their connotative meaning, these songs or instrumental music can provide them with a deep insight about the world and humanity, thanks to which images they invoke. In addition, besides social development, music has also been proven to support their intellectual development. For example, in an observation in 2004, not until British students listened to masterpieces of composers like Mozart or Beethoven did their performance in IQ tests improve, which can be explained by an enhancement of neural connection in their brains.
In conclusion, although the demerits of music are conspicuous, I argue that it results in more significant effects on the youth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59169550173 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15335233412 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660899653979 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8129043902 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168995601917 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562034385829 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486158314201 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106779261839 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458252021621 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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