The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.
The maps illustrate the disparity of two types of student room at a particular university Australian.
Overall, the main distinction between two rooms includes the price, capacity and amenities with the feature of room for two occupants which is more spacious, expensive and equipped with more furniture than the single one.
In terms of the size and the price of these two rooms, the room is designed for dual occupancy, spanning 6m x 4m, and requires paying 350$ weekly for rent. Meanwhile, the remaining room cost 200$ per week with the smaller size of 6m x 2.5m.
Concerning the arrangement of the room, two types of room are equipped with the bathroom and a series of furniture comprising of stove, sink and microwave on the left and right side of the room. Only the two-person room is furnished with a dining set opposite the television and a bookshelf near the rest room. Adjacent to this set are two cupboards that split the room into two sections each with a bed and a study desk. Meanwhile, with the compact size, the room for one occupant is equipped with only a desk and a study desk together with a TV.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$350'.
Suggestion: $350
..., spanning 6m x 4m, and requires paying 350$ weekly for rent. Meanwhile, the remaini...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...ent. Meanwhile, the remaining room cost 200$ per week with the smaller size of 6m x ...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: COMPRISING_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprising' or ' consisting of'?
Suggestion: comprising; consisting of
... the bathroom and a series of furniture comprising of stove, sink and microwave on the left a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70202020202 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56293600291 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8342433303 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.375 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35396222712 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174476068623 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077641072457 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236846977787 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665172123672 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.