The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university

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The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

The picture compares a student room for 2 people and a student room for 1 person at a university in Australia.
Overall, both 2 rooms have adequate facilities for students who rent these rooms. However, a room for 2 students will be cheaper.
A single room is 6 meters in length and 2.5 meters in width. It has 1 bed and 1 bathroom. There is also a study desk for students to do their assignments or work and a television for them to entertain. It includes a stove, a sink and a microwave so that students can cook by themselves.
A room for 2 people has the same length as a single one but the width is 1.5 meters longer. It has similar cooking equipment, bathroom and TV like a room for 1 person. The beds and study desks are double to meet the needs of 2 people. A double room adds a bookshelf and 2 cupboards to make the private space for the students.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22424242424 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60291564992 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.099312428 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.3636363636 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510397636657 0.215688989381 237% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19447562753 0.103423049105 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167609897557 0.0843802449381 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.367034482125 0.15604864568 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155140139807 0.0819641961636 189% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 13.2329268293 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 11.4140731707 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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