The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university

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The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

The given pictures illustrate the differences between two kinds of student room, one for two people and one for one person, at an university in Australia.
In general, it is transparent that two types of room differ from each other in their price. This is because the two-student room provides additional facilities that are not equipped in one person room. Besides, there is also the difference between the areas of two rooms, the width in specific.
It can be seen from the plans that the price of student room for one person is $200 per week, while this figure for double room is more expensive, at about $350 a week. Both two kinds of rooms have the similar length of 6 metres, however, the width of two-student room is 1.5 metres more than the single room’s. Windows are both designed on the top-right side of the rooms.
Concerning the facilities and the equipment as well, both rooms have a same size bathroom located in the top-left corner, a sink, a stove and a microwave. Nonetheless, the room for two students owns 2 beds and 2 study desks which are positioned separately on two opposite sides of the 2 cupboards. In contrast, the room for one student has only 1 bed and a study desk, and has no table and chairs and bookshelf, which are fully provided in two-student room.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...r two people and one for one person, at an university in Australia. In general, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, nonetheless, so, well, while, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63318777293 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59274672445 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554585152838 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0088223848 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.566271217857 0.215688989381 263% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.235576971074 0.103423049105 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172482538339 0.0843802449381 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.39212401464 0.15604864568 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110802213255 0.0819641961636 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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