The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts depict the destination and genres of dance classes that young individuals in Australia are currently enrolled in. It is evident in the pie chart that Private studios represent the most prevalent option, whilst college-based studios account for the least.
Furthermore, in the bar chart, while ballet takes the lead among the children group, it is modern which is preferred by adolescents.
Regarding the pie chart, The proportion of private studios contributes to approximately half of the chart at 48%, followed closely by school halls with a reduction of 24%. Community halls and others and college-based studios register an extremely low percentage ( 18% and one out of ten respectively).
In terms of the bar chart, the students who are under 11 participate in ballet class with 600 attendances, followed by tap, with 450 counterparts, and Modern dance classes occupy the lowest position, with attendance numbers roughly half that of ballet. The figure for the students aged 11-16 bucks the trend, ballet is the least common with 300 students. Modern and tap rank first and second respectively ( 425 and an increase of 100 separately).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ios register an extremely low percentage 18% and one out of ten respectively. In...
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...d tap rank first and second respectively 425 and an increase of 100 separately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, regarding, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23913043478 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91002033266 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5447157947 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107380988793 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491413271657 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668236223878 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064479145125 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454914335909 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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