The line graph and table show the average monthly temperatures and annual hours of sunshine in three major cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given line chart and table illustrate the average temperature for each month and the total annual hours of sunshine for three different cities namely London, New York, and Sydney.
Overall, it is clear that the highest temperature in Sydney is in January and December, whereas New York and London have the hottest temperatures around July. And the amount of sunshine in Sydney each year is the lowest point among the three major cities.
Looking at the line chart, in January, the temperature in Sydney is the highest of the three cities, at 25 degrees, compared to London and New York, only around 10 degrees and 5 degrees respectively. In July, the temperature in London and New York increased significantly and became the two cities that have the hottest temperature in all three cities, around 25 degrees, and 30 degrees, while the figure for London and New York in December, only 10 degrees and 5 degrees. Meanwhile, Sydney decreased dramatically to only 15 degrees before rising considerably to 35 degrees in December. In December.
Looking at the table, New York and Sydney have the highest total of hours of sunshine per year, around 2535 hours and 2473 hours, in comparison with London only 1180 hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98536585366 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60167886125 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453658536585 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6703816902 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159761389425 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804948937203 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078445338775 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13071413458 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793917445101 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.