It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years, saving money becomes a skill among of people and it plays an essential role in a person’s future life.I Think it is an awesome skill if someone know how use and strongly agree with it.
On the one hand, parents should teach their children in their early years how manage their money and how split it for several tasks. In addition, they should notice to adolescences do not buy unnecessary things which leads waste your money. This Not only can help them when they go to university and live apart from the home and family but it also, is an advantage if everyone has this feature. For instance, in university you should pay the tuition, bills, and so on even know how allocate your money you can save some money for yourself. Even though parents have a crucial role to bring their children with this skill, education systems should teach them too.
On the other hand, young generation spend much money daily for useless things and waste them without any think. In such case, families should not provide their needs for better understanding. They do not pay attention for their life prospect in the future and do not worry about it. If you have this vision your life never improve and the quality of your life don’t change. Pluses, it becomes a big problem in your marriage life when cannot save your money at least one third of it. Hence, it is necessary especially for young generation to know how they can spend their money in the right ways.
In conclusion, save money never this means you don’t allow spend your money for different thing, it means don’t waste your money for useless things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ssential role in a person’s future life.I Think it is an awesome skill if someone...
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Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...Think it is an awesome skill if someone know how use and strongly agree with it. On...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, third, apart from, at least, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66202090592 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18849172908 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515679442509 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1020930579 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345352133807 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12789977048 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602918709705 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212871493016 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484678840011 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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