Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary life, there are some people believed that young people should follow the rules and traditions of their society for have a better life. However, others believed that they can doing anything on their own. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of young people should be free to behave as individuals. First, young people can be free for doing anything are believed to equalize support social skill among young adolescents regardless of their family background. This social skill support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall confident rate of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which promotes an egalitarian society. Second, young people can be free for their behavior probably result in a greater supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that comfortable for living and knowledgeable human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technological in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once if people don’t have a suitable plans and neglect essential living conditions. First, young people should free their behave would likely correspond with a tremendous financial strain on a country. Generating no income from living conditions and people don’t follow the rules for society, company could become over-reliant on the state budget. Furthermore, people would likely tendencyself-indulge becomes a burden to society, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as healthcare system and transport infrastructure. Second, young people don’t follow the traditions tempt many negative effect and other people including those who are not working pursuits or show no interest for living, thereby adding great burdens for society and enrollment staff if they are working and potentially wasting time that these young people could have spent a more suitable life in the future. It, instead, would be a more tradition viable option if the resources were focus on a people they can working and doing anything that not effect on society and other areas.
In conclusion, this phenomenon can be justified from certain angles but it’s potential coexist. From my perspective, the way that people live can effect on the society so that government should consider for allow that and support people that can development country for a better life not people just care about their live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: do
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pursuits or show no interest for living, thereby adding great burdens for society...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'work'.
Suggestion: work
...sources were focus on a people they can working and doing anything that not effect on s...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...can working and doing anything that not effect on society and other areas. In conclus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39215686275 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77853843872 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53431372549 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9675646448 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361156559545 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135987775523 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968806954195 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24096020346 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497516338822 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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