The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates how many percents of the car owners in the UK between 1971 and 2007.
What stands out from the graph is that while the percentage of car ownership in Great Britain experienced a significant fall, the figures for those with two and more cars surged over the period of 36 years. In addition, households with regular use of a car witnessed a stability and those with three or more cars were always the lowest during the mentioned period
Starting at the highest point in 1971 with nearly 50% of families in Britain possessed no car at all before seeing a significant slump to nearly a half at the end of the period (more than 25%). One-car owners ranked the second in this country at approximately 45% at the beginning. After some rises and falls, this figure remained nearly unchanged in 2007. However, it became the most popular trend in the UK during these suggested years.
Finally, the two remaining different proportion of homes with two or more cars which were only under 10% in 1971 had upward trends during 36 -year period. The numbers of families with two cars were around 8% at the beginning year witnessed a relative progress until overtaking that of no-car users to rank the second at about 27% in 2007. The households with three or more cars saw a gradual leap from about 2% to around 6%, being considered a all-time low figure of the four factors over the same period.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 442, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...about 2% to around 6%, being considered a all-time low figure of the four factors...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.644 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41773778562 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.5994350263 43.030603864 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144099368275 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679201228658 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447805419604 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104555717857 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290369258272 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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