With the development of online shopping more people prefer to buy things online rather than in a store. Do you think it is a positive or negative change?
An increasing trend in today's world is the emergence of online work and shopping. To purchase something from a market is becoming less common due to development of online shopping. This essay will discuss the both sides of the view, using a practical approach.
At the outset, there are several arguments in favor of my stance to support that online shopping has great benefits. Furthermore, people are enjoying and spending more time in scrolling and selecting goods of their own interest from their desire shopping centers in no time. Moreover, benefits of time saving and reduced travel expenses have wondered the people. Purchasing and getting things at your door step is actually time management and you can spend that time with your family in any park.
On the other hand, some people are also obsessed with shopping and as result they are wasting their time and money without thinking. While some ads in online selling and purchasing are just to show off the one side of the product and when a person buys that than the results are quite opposite. As a result, buyers have to face the quality issues in online shopping as compared to buying goods from store which is an authentic and satisfactory process.
To conclude, from my point of view, people now a days are quite busy and they often have time to do shopping that's why online shopping is becoming more popular in people and community. As well governments are also promoting this type of selling and buying because of less travelling costs and energy consumptions in stores and malls.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 44, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...conclude, from my point of view, people now a days are quite busy and they often have time...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a (days)' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a (days); days
...lude, from my point of view, people now a days are quite busy and they often have time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, moreover, so, then, well, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85283018868 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45822338866 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577358490566 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7666625535 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273890781317 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088429146484 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542752445518 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157126787463 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436890483952 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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