People's poor health is because of life style, how the lifestyle influences the health?
As we all know that health is wealth because without living a healthy lifestyle we can not succeed in our life and even we can not achieve our goals and ambitions. There is a great concern among people related to health and issues related to it as they are not satisfied with their daily routine. Now-a-days people are sleeping late at night and waking up late in the morning due to which they have disturbed natural sleep cycle. The poor life style not only influences your health but it also disturbs your social, economical and financial life as well.
health department should give awareness to people about healthy lifestyle and should aware them against the side effects of poor lifestyle. A healthy man can not only take care of himself but he can also play his positive role in the betterment of the society and growth of its people.
Government of Austrailia is taking great initiative to educate its people against the negative impacts of poor life style and health services are developing laws to improve this issue by fixing office timings to early morning. Citizens are encourged to follow the rules and regulations to improve their lifestyle for the prosperity, productivity and efficiency of their environment and country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Health
...conomical and financial life as well. health department should give awareness to peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95215311005 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53062558293 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598086124402 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.8342342211 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.375 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 7.25397266985 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365473183493 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136797928576 0.0925447433944 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103382800062 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220239668888 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809220793624 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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