The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Task
The flow chart Illustrate the brick manufacturing process.it is clear that this process includes seven distinct stages from digger and clay to the roller.
At the first stage of brick manufacturing is using the digger. The main function of a digger is to dig and move large amounts of earth and other materials. It can be used for a variety of tasks such as brick manufacturing . The material that the digger collect is clay.
Next, clay gets into a roller machine. The machine work by electricity also it contains of metal grid to put the clay on it then it use water and sand. After this stage, the process use the wire cutter to give the size of the stone until it becomes blocks. After doing the stone, it needs to be dry.the drying process takes up to24-48hours then the kiln (moderate temperature from 200-980° and high from 870-1300° )which takes 48-72hours .then the final process is to package it and deliver it to the customers .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ety of tasks such as brick manufacturing . The material that the digger collect is...
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...gh from 870-1300° which takes 48-72hours .then the final process is to package it ...
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...ckage it and deliver it to the customers .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68263473054 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54796774528 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.2174161985 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257593862799 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106576436076 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107759376363 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185583742886 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622162193161 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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