News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?
Broadcasting news reports on the air or on papers by the concerned news editing personnel’s are highly influenced by the various factors, taken into consideration while making a decision to publish a sort of information. Firstly, this essay will discuss, how the governing bodies and rule and regulation of information technology affect it and secondly, the wrong impression of bad news and the positive impacts of good news on society will be examined.
To begin with, mass communication in any nation today is widely dominated by the ruling establishments, thus restricting them to work in a free atmosphere. Briefly explaining, the governing agencies have a close eye on the news media as they are enjoying the power to persuade the public to accept or deny anything they aim for. For example, in North Korea, there is a complete restriction on the publication of news on newspapers or TV, and anything that has to be reported should be in alliance with the interests of the Government. Furthermore, there are a set of rules that have to be followed by all of the broadcasting services in order to regulate the news that paws a way for the unity and prosperity of a nation.
Moreover, nowadays fabricated news is broadcasted all over the world in such a way that never was witnessed before and it has turned most of the nations into tribes fighting between themselves. To summarize, media is the means of spreading instruction across the globe and if used adversely, it sometimes leads to wars between countries or communal violence within a society. For instance, due to the hateful news reporting of media last year, there arose an armed conflict between the two nuclear powers, India and Pakistan, and if not intervened by international agencies on time, it could have turned into a disaster for humanity. However, if these news channels are determined to make any changes in society, it is the best platform for reform, such as spreading the awareness of global warming, health consciousness and so on.
To conclude, anything to be published in print media or TV channels is affected by numerous factors including, the ruling establishment and rules and regulations for the report broadcasting department. As mentioned earlier, mass media has a powerful impact on the public and if used in the wrong way can lead to fatal wars, in contrast to that, reforming a nation is most possible by using optimist reports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in contrast, sort of, such as, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98522167488 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97990063743 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549261083744 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.1868287503 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 168.666666667 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8333333333 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8333333333 7.06120827912 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21428101327 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802445143432 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514343415193 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133640695122 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530913324399 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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