The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant(Mixed charts).
The line graph represents the average temperatures per day in two distinguished cities in Australia and the bar chart illustrates how many days with rainfall every month for these two mentioned cities.
What stands from the line graph is that the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius in Brisband and Canberra witnesses a fluctuation and remains stable throughout the year. In addition, Brisband experiences the highest temperature, whereas Canberra is of the opposite one at the lowest degree. It is also noticeable in the bar chart that Brisband generally has more amount of daily rainfall than Canberra during the year.
With reference to the line graph, starting at the highest degree with around 280C in January, Brisband’s temperatures surges to a little bit more than 300C in February. This figures saw a downfall until reaching the bottom at nearly 200C during the next three months. After some rises and falls, it then went up significantly to the end of the year getting approximately the same degree as the first month. Followed it are the maximum temperatures of Canberra, the minimum temperatures of Brisband and Canberra with 270C, 220C, 120C respectively. These figures experience a fall over the first six months before rising to the same points as at the beginning of the year.
Turning to the second bar chart, half of the years in Brisband exhibit more than 10 days with rainfall, in which February and March ranks the highest at 14 days, followed by January at 13 days. Two couples of months are April and December, May and November witnessed the same number of rainfall at 12 and 10 respectively. The others left experience fewer than 10 days of rainfall per month. In contrast, Canberra’s days of the rainfall during the year are all under 10 days, in which June, July, august and October have equal rainfall days at 10. The left ones have from 7 to 8 rainy days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ry, Brisband’s temperatures surges to a little bit more than 300C in February. This figure...
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Suggestion:
...until reaching the bottom at nearly 200C during the next three months. After some...
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...rra with 270C, 220C, 120C respectively. These figures experience a fall over the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, then, whereas, in addition, in contrast, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 965.302439024 166% => OK
No of words: 324.0 196.424390244 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93518518519 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71620895996 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521604938272 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 283.868780488 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9950110613 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251266874438 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891897707481 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084944861882 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178609946215 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784834946799 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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