You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the floor plan of a public library scheduled in a two-decade-ago period and the current time.
Overall, over 20 years, there have been several changes especially focusing on the central area and both western and eastern sides of the public library.
Dated back to 20 years ago, visitors could enter the public library through an entrance adjusted to the center of the building front face. At the first steps onto the building floor, people could be encountered by two enveloped areas on either side nearby the entrance, one of which is a reading room, where newspapers and magazines were available. On another side was an enquiry desk to deal with issues related to tickets, book returns, etc. From the entrance led to the middle of the floor that were settled by two tables comprised of 8 chairs for each. These sets of furniture separated two open sites for adult books categorised by genres as fiction and non-fiction. At the end of the northwestern side was a disclosed site for CDs, videos, computer games, while a similarly constructed area for children books was at the opposite corner.
Today, most amenities have been modified, except the entrance. The two enveloped areas closest to the entrance is altered to a computer room on the left, and a cafe on the right. From the entrance to the middle of the floor, the two sets of seating are removed, while the nearby open site previously for adult fiction book now offers all reference books. Adult fiction books is now positioned to the other open site, above an information desk that is equipped with 3 self-service machines below, right at the upper of the cafe. A disclosed area for children’s fiction books at the northwestern corner, fulfilled by two sofas within and serving the purpose to organise storytelling events. Another sites also for children, called Children’s books at the previous time, now alters its function as a lecture room.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The diagram illustrates the floor plan o...
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...ecade-ago period and the current time. Overall, over 20 years, there have been ...
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...ecially focusing on the central area and both western and eastern sides of the pu...
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...d eastern sides of the public library. Dated back to 20 years ago, visitors co...
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...brary. Dated back to 20 years ago, visitors could enter the public library ...
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...dren books was at the opposite corner. Today, most amenities have been modified...
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...erence books. Adult fiction books is now positioned to the other open site, above...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 965.302439024 167% => OK
No of words: 326.0 196.424390244 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94785276074 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64057696224 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 106.607317073 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555214723926 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 283.868780488 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5173429284 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123887388604 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472057331401 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500177884191 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963982461048 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433144996153 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 40.7170731707 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The diagram illustrates the floor plan o...
^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecade-ago period and the current time. Overall, over 20 years, there have been ...
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Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecially focusing on the central area and both western and eastern sides of the pu...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d eastern sides of the public library. Dated back to 20 years ago, visitors co...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...brary. Dated back to 20 years ago, visitors could enter the public library ...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dren books was at the opposite corner. Today, most amenities have been modified...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erence books. Adult fiction books is now positioned to the other open site, above...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 965.302439024 167% => OK
No of words: 326.0 196.424390244 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94785276074 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64057696224 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 106.607317073 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555214723926 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 283.868780488 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5173429284 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123887388604 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472057331401 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500177884191 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963982461048 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433144996153 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 40.7170731707 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.