You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In many countries around the word, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Today, urban sprawl has been expanded across countries, outraging a dramatic decline in the rural population. While the situation of rural people moving to cities brings certain benefits, however, it presents several drawbacks as well, from which I can admit the phenomenon is a neutral development. The essay below will discuss the author’s personal perspective, providing relevant examples from their own knowledge or experience.
To begin with, there are two major advantages of the movements from rural to urban areas. One of these is the access to better living comforts, as the majority of daily amenities are majorly gathered in urban sites, including shops, theatres. For example, in Vietnam, schools and educational institutions widespread in most cities, compared to those in the countryside, which sparks the general demands for travel to the urban areas for fulltime education. Another benefit of the movement to cosmopolitans and metropolitans is higher career prospects with a more competitive salary. Accordingly, due to the purpose of advertising and selling products to the general public, most companies concentrate on the urban capitals where the majority of customers inhabit. Take the instance of Vietnam, where nation-state organisation like FPT or VNPAY settle their official departments in the nation’s economic centers including Hanoi, Ho Chi Minh City, encouraging employees to travel to towns and cities regularly for work enquiries. The two mentioned benefits clearly reach a perception that inhabitance within the urban rather than rural sites might be the optimal choice when it comes to work and living.
However, urban sprawl also induces two admittedly negative consequences, including scarcity of land slots within cities and towns. This means estates for accommodation are now decreasing, when more people from the countryside move to cities, consuming more land to settle their residence. The example for this is Vietnam, where a great influx of rural population flows into the capital of the country, taking up more constructions within the area for housing. Moreover, the redundancy of estates in the countryside should be included, when more countryside areas go into the state of isolation, in which fewer people remain their inhabitance in the site. This might waste certain uses of the countryside, as under the circumstance of isolation, a great quantity of rural land is saved up, suitable for various purposes in life such as entertainment, education, while cities and towns are already overpopulated for the life targets. Given that, it is apparent that the situation of urban sprawl should only extend under any appropriate conditions.
In conclusion, the rural-to-urban movement appears to be an impartial progress, given both its positive and negative impacts on human life. In the future, as people’s levels of recognition are highly raised, the decision to inhabit in either the countryside or towns and cities will be taken into more proper consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2554.0 1615.20841683 158% => OK
No of words: 465.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49247311828 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97732130145 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 809.1 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.880965267 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.888888889 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153687964544 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472749796271 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391446362141 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951634821905 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497788473162 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 78.4519038076 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.