It is believed that, these days,international physical activities and music festivals are being hosted by numerous countries. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon, which are having corrosive impacts on residents’ well-being and the environment.
On the one hand, the explanations why sport and concerts are being organized by several countries are varied. One of the reasons is because the profits after hosting these events are significantly huge. To be specific, with influenced artists, a concert in developed countries can attract up to million audiences, which can increase the rate of renting hotel and resort services in the regions, and this contributes considerable profit to the financial development for the countries. Secondly, for many nations, hosting physical events and music performances is an excellent opportunity to spread their positive images to the outside world. This is because, when these positive culture values are spread widely, another chance of preserving these cultural heritages is created via the awareness and the pride of young generations about their country’s cultural values, this will somewhat maintain these heritages.
On the other hand, that many territories establish sport and music events exerts myriad demerits. Initially, without thorough management, these events will affect the environment. To be specific, large-scale events often require meticulous plans to tackle the amount of rubbish thrown immoderately after the events; however, if there are no trash selecting and tackling plans to deal with such problems, the number of trash from the process of establishing the events and from spectators are countless. which not only affects the landscape of the city but also pollutes the environment. Furthermore, these social events can quickly spread diseases. This is because, when communicable diseases such as Covid-19 and Flu are in a proper condition, they can be spread strongly through the cheers when the audiences’ favorite team wins or singing together in a concert. This will create an impeccable condition for these diseases. As a result, humans’ health will be considerably affected.
In conclusion, holding sport and music events by many countries is caused by several factors such as reinforcing the economics and raising youngsters’ awareness and this exerts myriad disadvantages on the environment and individuals’ health through inadequate plans and epidemic diseases.
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both views and state your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69105691057 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04601741701 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550135501355 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.5871607709 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100397580321 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384657341312 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292430842209 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624393541646 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198424529505 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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