Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary times, poor countries are often supported through financial aid by affluent counties; however, this shows the inefficiency. Instead of that, rich countries should provide other types of helps rather than monetary support. in my opinion, i completely agree with this statement and in this essay i will shed light on my perspective.
To begin with, Financial supports can alleviate famine in poor countries, the residents can use that money to buy necessary food and medicines; however, this does not mainly focus on the main problem, the poor have no other ways except waiting for monetary supports because the root of poverty is the unemployment and the poor infrastructure.
Therefore, developed counties should generate more jobs and give lessons in order to solve the main problem that cause poverty. For instance, a worker if he is doing his dream job, this can create a huge profit and he can make money himself and not be depended on external financial assistance. not to mention that, the infrastructure plays an important role in developing an counties. To be specific, the goods and food cannot be distributed efficiently in rough and poor quality road, this is a huge drawback in generating jobs. For example, in some regions can only grow vegetables and fruit and when they cannot exchange such vegetable to rice or other necessary food, they will be starved and get into sickness. This is the main cause famine.
in conclusion, helping poorer counties through financial aid does show the efficiency but it is just in short-term. There are plenty of ways instead of financially aiding such as infrastructure supports and generating employments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18014705882 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88375706721 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1231104124 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.416666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23793110491 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084636864633 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908970851356 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140136899112 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772673724603 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.