Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways What is your opinion

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ow that intelligence can be measured in many different ways, and not one by itself. The essay ...
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...t will discuss wether it’s the answer. To begin with, success is an easy way fo...
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Suggestion: every day
...the mean time, his work is saving a lot everyday. Secondly, being on top could be a ...
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...me, his work is saving a lot everyday. Secondly, being on top could be a way to...
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...ize people, but it’s not about measuring how good they are. Some got lucky to hea...
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...e to succeed. This could be due to their financial status or some other circumst...
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...uld be due to their financial status or some other circumstances. Furthermore, i...
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...o seprate lucky ones, from smart ones. To sum up, success indeed make intellage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19858156028 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81947676402 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5725411458 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8095238095 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388355919218 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882816084619 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892360773518 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208642166304 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906058846134 0.056905535591 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.