In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In contemporary society, many numbers of people prefer reading electrical books instead of typed books. Some people argue that nonprinted books are more useful than the known books because they can save money rather than buying papers from libraries, and this advantage outweigh any potential disadvantages.
One the downside of reading computerized books that it can be considered as a harmful resource for eyes due to the dangerous emissions that spreading out from electrical devices screen. For example, it was proved that reading newspapers or journals on laptop screens for a long time decreasing focusing with 35.0 % per year. Moreover, when readers using online website, a proportion of inappropriate fake links were installed previously in order to hacking user’s personal information. Hence, a lot of data such as, passwords and emails could be missed. It could be overcome on that by avoiding the uncertain websites.
On the positive side, downloading electrical books can save money. Although writing on traditional books is the easiest way; however, this type of books is often having an expensive price leading to losing the target amount of purchasing. Regarding cutting money, reading using devices is much convenient so it drops the book and transportation financial costs. This resulting in saving more time for reading and creativity to create an amazing idea for innovation. Not only could time be reduced by dropping the mobility costs but also by reading in leisure times.
In conclusion, despite of using the publications has no hazards on seeing, electrical devices like phones or tablets are more suitable for travels. I think that books and magazines are unsuitable for visits and they could be replaced by social media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, moreover, regarding, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3285198556 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8106395416 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653429602888 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5454254961 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284732551287 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086337211351 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897974143158 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18329685308 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129289518176 0.056905535591 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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