Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The childhood life of my grandparents was completely different atmosphere from what we have now. In fact, my grandparents are facing over the year of 80, which is long enough time too confront with many types of new lifestyle, new era, even they entered to new century. So that i will absolutely agree with the statement that my grandparents used to have harder and more unsophisticated childhood life comparing to ours. Since the young ages of many elders, there have been lots of innovations and inventions about technique and transportation freedom which made our life easier and convenient.
The most remarkable change about the 21st century is that technological innovations; such us, television, computer, cellphone, oven, washing machine and so on. We, actually, have infinite lists to mention here. I am sure that in my grandparents time there was no such thing like modern sophisticated cellphone, which gave us huge opportunity to make connection with each other. I remember my grandmother saying that she is really amazed the strenght of cellphone which has high capacity of implementing virtually everything. She said that in order to have news or connection from her family or beloved people, she had to write long letter with ink pen and have to wait their response almost a month, since she used to live far away from her family. In the other hand, we have developed cell phones which have ability of not only texting or speaking, but also accessing to internet which is the extraordinary way of committing everything.
The second important invention was freedom of transportation; such as, airplane, car, cargo, bus and train etc. Early people, my grandmother says, who lived before the late 20th century were incarcerated of going a place they desired. Because they were devoid of transportation. The most dominant way of getting around was only horse with cart. Even tough as said common, actually not common as everyone could effort. Only the wealthy, loaded people or someone who does high or functional job could afford horses. To explore other countries or even visit relatives who lived litte farther, it was the most tricky thing to do. Listening to my grandmothers word, i feel myself extremely lucky and blessed to live in 21st century.
I believe that humans who are living in 21st century or today are the happiest people of this life, because we had enormous opportunity to know as well as live in such amazing, unbelievable innovations and creations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'to confront'?
Suggestion: to confront
...e year of 80, which is long enough time too confront with many types of new lifestyle, new e...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...en they entered to new century. So that i will absolutely agree with the statemen...
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Suggestion:
...y amazed the strenght of cellphone which has high capacity of implementing virtua...
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Suggestion:
...ther hand, we have developed cell phones which have ability of not only texting o...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rcerated of going a place they desired. Because they were devoid of transportation. The...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... do. Listening to my grandmothers word, i feel myself extremely lucky and blessed...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'i feel', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225596529284 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.154013015184 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114967462039 0.0866891130778 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0737527114967 0.046263068375 159% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0629067245119 0.0685040099705 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110629067245 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0390455531453 0.0351676179071 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87012026802 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0325379609544 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0433839479393 0.0887237588012 49% => More determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00650759219089 0.0209618222197 31% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0238611713666 0.0139019557991 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2496.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 411.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07299270073 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321167883212 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250608272506 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187347931873 0.174417080927 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.143552311436 0.112833075102 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87012026802 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 70.301944028 59.2087087015 119% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6315789474 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1640285309 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.368421053 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.644075263715 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 46.692406198 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.29104477612 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231509367925 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0855867640567 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0569554710062 0.0752933317313 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.444737579108 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164512932964 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824909070025 0.114077575197 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479150586086 0.0781384742642 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311989732032 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0553215514793 0.067059652881 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155273659363 0.210909579961 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429903680332 0.0618886996521 69% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
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Rates: 86 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 26 Out of 30