Since the time of stone age animals are being exploited by humans for a variety of purposes. Nowadays, animals are being used as mainly food and experiments. These poor creatures are cruelly killed and caged to fulfill human needs and greed. It is matter of debate among masses. Some thinks that animals should be treated equal as humans and some believe that animals should be used in science experimentation and as food. So let's analyze both ends of the spectrum before coming to any logical conclusion.
Firstly, at the one side of the spectrum some individuals believes that these speech less creatures should not be exploited by the humans for any kind of objective and they should also enjoy same safety and protection like humans. Animal meat is a good source of protein and other minerals which are considered good for human intake, so a large number of animals
are used for producing meat. At the same time it is also proved that green vegetables also provide same amount of protein to human body as meat. Moreover animals are also being hunt by hunters for entertainment and there skin is also used as rugs and there heads are hung on the walls as a symbol of pride which is not justifying. In addition, animals are also used in experiments of bio-chemical weapons which is not for the betterment of human civilization.
However, on the other end there are those who thinks that animals should be used for the needs of humans because many medications are discovered such as cure for T.B and many more medicines will be produced by animal testing. Beside this it is also pointed out that if the animal products should not be consumed it will result in the break down of poultry and meat based industries and also effect overall economy. Some people also says that some wild animals also attack humans for self-protection. If animals are provided with same rights then humans may have to suffer in both ways, even if they kill it or not.
From the above discussion it can be concluded that animals are helping humans to satisfy their needs, but now days they are being over exploit for many useless experiments which can have many lethal results. So animals should be used only for such aims which results in the goodwill of human population instead for entertainment and war purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this speech' or 'these speeches'?
Suggestion: this speech; these speeches
...spectrum some individuals believes that these speech less creatures should not be exploited ...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...re considered good for human intake, so a large number of animals are used for producing meat....
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...man intake, so a large number of animals are used for producing meat. At the same...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...mount of protein to human body as meat. Moreover animals are also being hunt by hunters ...
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Line 6, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: B
...tions are discovered such as cure for T.B and many more medicines will be produce...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261072261072 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.172494172494 0.155533422707 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0792540792541 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0606060606061 0.0501214627716 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.02331002331 0.0437548338989 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.16317016317 0.122226691241 133% => OK
Participles: 0.0722610722611 0.0403226058552 179% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43384877878 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.011655011655 0.0326793684256 36% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.004662004662 0.00163938923432 284% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0722610722611 0.0861772015684 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027972027972 0.021408717616 131% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013986013986 0.011925033212 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2312.0 1933.35771543 120% => OK
No of words: 401.0 316.048096192 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76558603491 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321695760599 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216957605985 0.28420135186 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122194513716 0.203846283523 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0822942643392 0.137316102897 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43384877878 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491271820449 0.56093040696 88% => OK
Word variations: 53.4892914354 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5882352941 20.7743622355 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1543227052 49.517814964 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 127.492653851 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5882352941 20.7743622355 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 45.2839958926 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.93636363636 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437646990856 0.332605444948 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108565377316 0.102741220458 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0680161836865 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517540304678 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157966607948 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170121045199 0.134430193775 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792707201489 0.0742795772207 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.384987255076 0.324371583561 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0321161677318 0.0638462369009 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303136096654 0.228012699653 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613880387798 0.058150111329 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
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We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9