A/D Are people less happy than they were in the past?
Are people less happy than they were in the past?
Happeness is the goal for each human beings. People search for happeness in different ways. Some people fell happy by working hard, others fell happy by faling in love. Although some people believe that people are more happy nowaday's due to technology advancemnts like computer, cars and internet that faciliate our life significantly, I believe that people are less happy than they were in the past. The basis for my views is because people are more stressed not only physically but also, financialy and educationaly.
Unfortunatley, most of the people believe that money is the only reason for happeness. In contrast, people in the past tend to work less hours, they prefer to spend more time with their families. Therefore, they were less stressed and more relaxed.However, our generation started to work harder and longer hours to chase happeness. Working for more than 8 hours a day can pose a great risk to our body. Study done by the University Of California indicated that working long hours can cause seriouse illness like depression, heart problems and anxiety. Therefore, People who tend to work extra hours or day to collect more money to live more happely, they end up suffering from depression, anxiety or heart complication. Thus, they become less happy that people in the past.
In addition to working hard and extended hours, people nowaday's are more stressed with financial burden. People in the past have limited or no financial stress because there were not that much expenses that they have to pay for like the one's that we have today. Our generation required to spend most of their salery on house mortgage, car insurance and tuitions fess. As a result, people have no money left do basic fun activities like traveling aboard, hiking, playing fevorit sports or just relax and imiditate. Given that financial problems add up to their strees from work, people are less happy than the people in the past.
Finally, people now are under significant education stress. Unlike the past, people now are required to obtain a higher education to get a decient job position. Therefore, they risk their life and budjet to join universities that they can not offord. Instead of join the work force immidiatley after high school, they west a valuble timeat the university. Yet, they may face a tremendous competition from other students when they apply for job. Therefore, people are sever education stress that limit or prevent them from being happy.
As a conclusion, even thought technology tremendously made our life easy, the stress from work stress, financial burden and education stress made people less happy than they were in the past.
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Essay evaluation report
they west a valuble timeat the university.
they waste a valuable time at the university.
Sentence: People search for happeness in different ways.
Error: happeness Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Some people fell happy by working hard, others fell happy by faling in love.
Error: faling Suggestion: facing
Sentence: Although some people believe that people are more happy nowaday's due to technology advancemnts like computer, cars and internet that faciliate our life significantly, I believe that people are less happy than they were in the past.
Error: faciliate Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: advancemnts Suggestion: advancements
Sentence: The basis for my views is because people are more stressed not only physically but also, financialy and educationaly.
Error: educationaly Suggestion: educational
Error: financialy Suggestion: financial
Sentence: Unfortunatley, most of the people believe that money is the only reason for happeness.
Error: happeness Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Therefore, they were less stressed and more relaxed.However, our generation started to work harder and longer hours to chase happeness.
Error: happeness Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Study done by the University Of California indicated that working long hours can cause seriouse illness like depression, heart problems and anxiety.
Error: seriouse Suggestion: serious
Sentence: Therefore, People who tend to work extra hours or day to collect more money to live more happely, they end up suffering from depression, anxiety or heart complication.
Error: happely Suggestion: happily
Sentence: Our generation required to spend most of their salery on house mortgage, car insurance and tuitions fess.
Error: salery Suggestion: salary
Sentence: As a result, people have no money left do basic fun activities like traveling aboard, hiking, playing fevorit sports or just relax and imiditate.
Error: imiditate Suggestion: imitate
Error: fevorit Suggestion: favorite
Sentence: Given that financial problems add up to their strees from work, people are less happy than the people in the past.
Error: strees Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Unlike the past, people now are required to obtain a higher education to get a decient job position.
Error: decient Suggestion: decent
Sentence: Therefore, they risk their life and budjet to join universities that they can not offord.
Error: offord Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: budjet Suggestion: budget
Sentence: Instead of join the work force immidiatley after high school, they west a valuble timeat the university.
Error: valuble Suggestion: valuable
Error: immidiatley Suggestion: immediately
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 19 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 25 in 30 //it could be 27 or over because of spelling errors.
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 19 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 452 350
No. of Characters: 2196 1500
No. of Different Words: 214 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.611 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.858 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.39 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.08 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.413 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.44 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.332 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.519 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut also, financialy and educationaly. Unfortunatley, most of the people believ...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...ntrast, people in the past tend to work less hours, they prefer to spend more time with th...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ntrast, people in the past tend to work less hours, they prefer to spend more time w...
^^^^
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...hey were less stressed and more relaxed.However, our generation started to work harder ...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...cial stress because there were not that much expenses that they have to pay for like...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261386138614 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.152475247525 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0910891089109 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0693069306931 0.046263068375 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0514851485149 0.0685040099705 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116831683168 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.029702970297 0.0351676179071 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54576355735 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0316831683168 0.0309702414327 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0019801980198 0.00188951952338 105% => OK
Determiners: 0.0613861386139 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00792079207921 0.0209618222197 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00792079207921 0.0139019557991 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2719.0 2387.08602151 114% => OK
No of words: 451.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0288248337 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328159645233 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228381374723 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161862527716 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117516629712 0.112833075102 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54576355735 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481152993348 0.524397521467 92% => OK
Word variations: 54.0527906762 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.04 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8767740801 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.76 120.699889404 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.04 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.48 0.644075263715 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 40.8781374723 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.49275362319 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.53680931069 0.300154397459 179% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106409574635 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0722310592551 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487454538617 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183419442539 0.151897553556 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207598936918 0.114077575197 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217368176339 0.0781384742642 278% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.377689040531 0.336927656856 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0835299876517 0.067059652881 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.463534882825 0.210909579961 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.247603980715 0.0618886996521 400% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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