Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
Yesterday I was passing through my neighbour's place. I heard uncle was yelling on his son. When I tried to hear, i came to know uncle was
punishing son as he was playing outdoor games instead of study. Suddenly thought came into mind is it really necessary to study whole day?
I told myself no, children should play outdoor games as well as do study well.
If children will study for whole day, his body will bacame inactive. Children should do exercise do develope himself/herself. Indirectly
outdoor games are the part of exercise. As we all know our brain's work system. However we keep loading stress on it,brain needs some
buffer time. So we should think like physical execise means we are giving our brain some pleasure which is mandatory.
At last we should keep in mind that physical exercise is essential part of our life, with balancing academic studies children should give
time to physical exercise too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lling on his son. When I tried to hear, i came to know uncle was punishing so...
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... tried to hear, i came to know uncle was punishing son as he was playing outdoor ...
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Suggestion: Punishing
...d to hear, i came to know uncle was punishing son as he was playing outdoor games ins...
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... do develope himself/herself. Indirectly outdoor games are the part of exercise. ...
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Suggestion: Outdoor
...evelope himself/herself. Indirectly outdoor games are the part of exercise. As we a...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...outdoor games are the part of exercise. As we all know our brains work system. How...
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Suggestion: However,
... As we all know our brains work system. However we keep loading stress on it,brain need...
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...em. However we keep loading stress on it,brain needs some buffer time. So we shoul...
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...ep loading stress on it,brain needs some buffer time. So we should think like phy...
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Suggestion: Buffer
...ading stress on it,brain needs some buffer time. So we should think like physical ...
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...ng academic studies children should give time to physical exercise too.
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...ademic studies children should give time to physical exercise too.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221590909091 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.227272727273 0.158761421928 143% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0852272727273 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0568181818182 0.046263068375 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.113636363636 0.0685040099705 166% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.102272727273 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0397727272727 0.0351676179071 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46397696881 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0227272727273 0.0309702414327 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0227272727273 0.0887237588012 26% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0397727272727 0.0209618222197 190% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0113636363636 0.0139019557991 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 935.0 2387.08602151 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 408.028673835 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91772151899 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.48200974243 79% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341772151899 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253164556962 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164556962025 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0696202531646 0.112833075102 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46397696881 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 212.727598566 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.524397521467 126% => OK
Word variations: 63.7833609422 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 13.1666666667 20.5533526081 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4862036331 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9166666667 120.699889404 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 20.5533526081 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.5376344086 176% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.4831223629 45.7405998639 84% => OK
Elegance: 0.914285714286 1.45489161554 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218258254384 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115260363082 0.103427244359 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0829241437673 0.0752933317313 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.612648910622 0.497263757937 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.252833319194 0.151897553556 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748196712229 0.114077575197 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065200459276 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.139257414455 0.336927656856 41% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0565552422919 0.067059652881 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997190017379 0.210909579961 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544895764894 0.0618886996521 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8870967742 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 8.42114695341 24% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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