Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There has been a growing dominance of some main languages as a result of globalization in the past 50 years. While some people argue that the loss of some minor languages helps to facilitate our lives and the increasing integrated economy, there still remain arguments that the disappearance of language can lead to the death of some cultures and making lives far more momentous. In my personal point of view, although the integration of using one language is necessary to the prosperity of trade and commerce, it consequently harms the diversity of cultures.
First of all, it is indisputable that language is intimately bound up with culture, thus the death of language can have negative impact on the survival of culture. Some customs, traditional norms and values are transmitted from generations to generations through words of mouth. Take the case of the increasing prevalence of English as a salient example. Nowadays, many children are taught English from a very young age for the sake of better future career path and even have no idea about mother tongue. Therefore, the interaction between old generations with younger generation is limited, which results in the inhibition of passing down culture to descendants.
Further more importantly, the loss of several languages makes lives far more momentous and less colorful rather than convenient. Some people like to travel to discover and experience diverse lifestyles in the world. When the world is the similar, experience new and thrilling things seems meaningless. There may be no motivation for learning new language and for finding out about mystery of other cultures, which eventually makes lives far more boring.
All in all, despite the huge benefits that using the same languages can bring to the wealth of economy, I strongly disagree that some languages are not important and should be erased. In the future, I believe that a campaign in terms of preserving and developing languages should be adopted for the sake of maintaining variety of cultures.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252100840336 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.134453781513 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0840336134454 0.0946595960268 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0616246498599 0.0501214627716 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0168067226891 0.0437548338989 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15406162465 0.122226691241 126% => OK
Participles: 0.047619047619 0.0403226058552 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85544945887 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0224089635854 0.0326793684256 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00840336134454 0.00163938923432 513% => OK
Determiners: 0.112044817927 0.0861772015684 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0168067226891 0.021408717616 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112044817927 0.011925033212 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2024.0 1933.35771543 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 316.048096192 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17073170732 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371951219512 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307926829268 0.28420135186 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.237804878049 0.203846283523 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158536585366 0.137316102897 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85544945887 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 63.148159974 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4285714286 20.7743622355 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8970179801 49.517814964 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.571428571 127.492653851 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7743622355 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 54.2212543554 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 2.13157894737 1.69124875643 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124229727285 0.332605444948 37% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109103533539 0.102741220458 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0888268675582 0.0668466124924 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.595528321006 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137099594845 0.148594505496 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623082933929 0.134430193775 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422474950837 0.0742795772207 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35572767689 0.324371583561 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100629216008 0.0638462369009 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994090849602 0.228012699653 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276386215311 0.058150111329 48% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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