Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live.
In today's hectic world, technology is an inseparable part of every society, dubbed by some era of technology. Our lives have undergone paradigm shift with the development of technology, which there have been a myriad of change to our life. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether technology has made the world better place to live or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that technological advancement provides an opportunity for people to benefits from every single facet of their life. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that technology plays a pivotal role in every country. In fact, hardly ever can societies progress without improvement of technology. Scientifically speaking, nowadays, vast majorities of people not only do look for better and easier life but also look for success. There are crowds of trials and tribulations in daily life, which without enhancement of technology no one and nothing are able to handle and manage them. Delving further into the issue reveals that not only are technology beneficial in various ways to people but also bring so many opportunity in order to progress. Actually, without development of technology hardly ever can we imagine our lives and without this improvement, our life seems to be paralyzed. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research in our country; show that countries which, benefits from technological advancement provided an opportunities for people to live easier and take advantages of various development such as medical science, internet or even different industries and so forth.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that technology provides fertile ground for people to reach higher education and patronize society to improve. Broadly speaking, not only can technology cause many progress in different realm but also can encourage people to continue their education and reach tertiary education. To put it in other word, there is a correlation between education and technology, which hardly ever can technology progress without researchers scientists and vice versa. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, technology can bring many harmful effects on every society such as destructive weapons in hands of terrorists or explosive in hands of children or even vast majorities of drawback cause by human activities. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, technology makes the world to live easier. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that technology can provide an opportunity for people to reach success in different ways. In addition, it provides fertile ground for people to gain various knowledge in different realm, which is beneficial for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun opportunity seems to be countable; consider using: 'many opportunities'.
Suggestion: many opportunities
...arious ways to people but also bring so many opportunity in order to progress. Actually, without...
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Line 3, column 971, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an opportunity' or simply 'opportunities'?
Suggestion: an opportunity; opportunities
...from technological advancement provided an opportunities for people to live easier and take adva...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun progress seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much progress', 'a good deal of progress'.
Suggestion: much progress; a good deal of progress
...speaking, not only can technology cause many progress in different realm but also can encoura...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...different ways. In addition, it provides fertile ground for people to gain variou...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256653992395 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.140684410646 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0950570342205 0.0866891130778 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.074144486692 0.046263068375 160% => OK
Pronouns: 0.032319391635 0.0685040099705 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125475285171 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0285171102662 0.0351676179071 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04615801011 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0380228136882 0.0309702414327 123% => OK
Particles: 0.00190114068441 0.00188951952338 101% => OK
Determiners: 0.06463878327 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0171102661597 0.0209618222197 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152091254753 0.0139019557991 109% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3064.0 2387.08602151 128% => OK
No of words: 478.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.410041841 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.416317991632 0.338922669872 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326359832636 0.251872472559 130% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.251046025105 0.174417080927 144% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.18410041841 0.112833075102 163% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04615801011 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518828451883 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 61.0412941459 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7619047619 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3653607463 48.84282405 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.904761905 120.699889404 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7619047619 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 55.3978880255 45.7405998639 121% => OK
Elegance: 1.66153846154 1.45489161554 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244407239009 0.300154397459 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0887622679589 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0594710725662 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.467688575049 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119833971458 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976506572942 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796805435994 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.420204251237 0.336927656856 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.02837283265 0.067059652881 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184784410734 0.210909579961 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662287716017 0.0618886996521 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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