Some people think that governments must insist on preserving traditional appearance of old buildings undergoing renovation or redevelopment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In this modern era, the world is progressing by leaps and bounds. in this rat race of progression, our heritage in form of old buildings is been demolished. Old buildings must be preserved through renovating is being claimed by a proportion of masses. In this essay, I would incline by the blokes those want to renovate old buildings
manifold points can be presented to support my view. First and foremost, old buildings always attracts tourists. thus, keeping old buildings in sound manners would attract large number of tourists which will further create employment for the local people. For example, Taj mahal in india is a famous old building and has been kept in great order, it contribute 3% of revenue which is a humungous amount
further emphasizing on my point of views, old buildings are true identity of one's civilization. So keeping them preserved is a handsome idea to preserve our civilization and heritage . What is more, Often old buildings are connected with great stories which can be helpful to inspire coming generation. For example, Jaliawala bag in India is a old historic place where a massacre took place, had been kept preserved to inspire youngster and coming generations.
On the contrary, others have conflicting views. According to them, renovating old building is nothing more than wasting money as it has no connection with boosting economy of the country. Adding to it, It always take a large amount of money and time to look after them, so renovating them is not at all a impressive idea
To recapitulate, it is said 'OLD IS GOLD'. A country is always known with the diversity and rich heritage. so we must look after our old buildings to keep our history alive
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'on the contrary', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253918495298 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.206896551724 0.155533422707 133% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0313479623824 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0532915360502 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109717868339 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0815047021944 0.0403226058552 202% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.76864615214 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0313479623824 0.0326793684256 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0626959247649 0.0861772015684 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0219435736677 0.021408717616 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0156739811912 0.011925033212 131% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1717.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94117647059 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346020761246 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276816608997 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19723183391 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138408304498 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76864615214 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 58.855000168 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2666666667 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6247090253 49.517814964 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.466666667 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 3.99599198397 526% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.9483275663 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.52688172043 1.69124875643 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182199192274 0.332605444948 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107094125108 0.102741220458 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759830011284 0.0668466124924 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.509514851419 0.534860350844 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131448494818 0.148594505496 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796724956162 0.134430193775 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296345069044 0.0742795772207 40% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.292643326809 0.324371583561 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0435123051624 0.0638462369009 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121142022256 0.228012699653 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00997403076131 0.058150111329 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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