Some people say that technology has made life simpler, while others say it has made it more complex.
The 21st century can be indeed termed as the era of technology. Almost all the tasks of humans including their basic necessary requirements are now dependent on technology, either directly or indirectly. I completely agree for most of the part that the advancement in technology and its adoption in the today's world has indeed simplified our life in a way we could have never imagined.
People now have the ability to communicate face to face real time even with the people in different continents. With the development of video calling, complex tasks such as corporate meetings, medical emergencies, imparting of education, all are now made possible which could not be thought of in the past.
Accurate navigation systems in almost every part of the globe wherever you travel, connected applications, now helps the travelers feel secure and aware of their surroundings in an alienated place.
The biggest technological advancement this era is witnessing is the development of Internet of Things, wherein every device which the person now interacts with and uses will be smart enough to proactively help the person and predict many of his/her actions based upon the usage statistics. Thanks, to IoT a person can now assure security for his family by smart security systems, and can be aware of their well being in real time, even when he is not around.
With Big Data in picture, we now have access to an ocean of knowledge gathered just by analyzing the previous historical data. Health care can now diagnose the diseases based on the genes of a person, and can warn a person before hand about illness that can affect him/her, based upon the regular health care monitoring done for him.
Technology therefore has indeed simplified and radically improved our lives, in a way we could have never thought of or imagined. Yes, even the fact that it does makes things complicated for a normal user is also agreeable to certain extent. That is primarily because of two reasons. One, anything that is new, is difficult to adapt so easily, and faces some inertia. Second, with technology and its various components available to solve or decrease almost every problem that a person faces, the decision of how much adoption of technology we want in our lives, what all areas we would like it to be a part of and govern, and what level of dependency we aspire for on the technology is totally subjective and varies from person to person.
Thus, depending and relying on different technologies much more than what is really needed, will indeed make your life overly complex and complicated with many of the features that that technology will provide not even useful. But, using it wisely to help and improve some constant challenges that you are facing, carefully examining the areas in which appropriate adoption is required and how it will work out in your scenario, will go a long way in not only making your life a lot more simpler, but also, a lot more better and productive, thereby helping you achieve a more happier and accomplished life.
- Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated. 16
- Some people say that technology has made life simpler, while others say it has made it more complex. 16
- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 224, Rule ID: BEFORE_HAND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beforehand'?
Suggestion: beforehand
...enes of a person, and can warn a person before hand about illness that can affect him/her, ...
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Line 10, column 562, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion of technology we want in our lives, what all areas we would like it to be a ...
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Line 12, column 484, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
... way in not only making your life a lot more simpler, but also, a lot more better and produc...
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Line 12, column 514, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ife a lot more simpler, but also, a lot more better and productive, thereby helping you ach...
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Line 12, column 572, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...oductive, thereby helping you achieve a more happier and accomplished life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213143872114 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.156305506217 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0817051509769 0.0880659088768 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.088809946714 0.0497285424764 179% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0497335701599 0.0444667217837 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119005328597 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0550621669627 0.0406280797675 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68075112961 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0195381882771 0.030933414821 63% => OK
Particles: 0.00177619893428 0.0016655270985 107% => OK
Determiners: 0.088809946714 0.0997080785238 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266429840142 0.0249443105267 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0195381882771 0.0148568991511 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3053.0 2732.02544248 112% => OK
No of words: 515.0 452.878318584 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92815533981 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341747572816 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260194174757 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182524271845 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128155339806 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68075112961 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 219.290929204 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.48968727796 107% => OK
Word variations: 63.4501727887 55.4138127331 115% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 30.2941176471 23.380412469 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.0586579846 59.4972553346 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.588235294 141.124799967 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2941176471 23.380412469 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.674092028746 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 56.3135351228 51.4728631049 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.31325301205 1.64882698954 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109093130409 0.391690518653 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102789091277 0.123202303941 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0645808732213 0.077325440228 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.630164298348 0.547984918172 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.186545906966 0.149214159877 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453824606888 0.161403998019 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383090687128 0.0892212321368 43% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.28542768479 0.385218514788 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0483929027323 0.0692045440612 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569322958496 0.275328986314 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538753538621 0.0653680567796 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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