Even though globalization affects the world’s economy in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
Globalization is a very common term in the 21st century. It is the integration of social, economic, political and cultural concepts through technology, transport and communication. Globalization influence our lives in beneficial ways as well as detrimental effect as well. This essay discuss about both benefits and drawbacks of globalization.
To begin with, Globalization has allowed the business to cross their terrestrial areas. This allows customers to have more variety of products for selection. Also, this has increased the competition among the vendors which leads to more quality products.
Another advantage is improvement of accessibility of resources. Such as, most of the developed countries are now able to access cheap labour force from developing countries which help them to increase their profit drastically.
However, the profit driven side of the globalization hugely effect on people in developing countries. The main concern is sweat workshops. Reports show most of the works work more than twelve hours per day for a very low salary. This effect on the individuals as well as dependants. In some countries teenagers involve in these sweat workshops. As a example, according to records in NIKE teenagers work more than fourteen hours per day only for fifty cents per hour. This is not a good sign for the development of the country.
In addition, the easy transportation has also increased the speed of spreading diseases among the countries. The most suitable example for this is the bird flu in Asia which infected most countries with in less time.
In conclusion, I would like to say, Globalization comes with positive and negative effects. Therefore, we must use more balanced approach to gain economic and financial benefits through globalization.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27652733119 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.109324758842 0.155533422707 70% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109324758842 0.0946595960268 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0675241157556 0.0501214627716 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0225080385852 0.0437548338989 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147909967846 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0225080385852 0.0403226058552 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.07916805879 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289389067524 0.0326793684256 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102893890675 0.0861772015684 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0064308681672 0.021408717616 30% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0096463022508 0.011925033212 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1790.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 316.048096192 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.41577060932 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365591397849 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.31541218638 0.28420135186 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.26164874552 0.203846283523 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186379928315 0.137316102897 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07916805879 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 65.2900379241 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.95 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1830001885 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 127.492653851 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.95 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 45.491218638 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.24193548387 1.69124875643 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184134513746 0.332605444948 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0787526746841 0.102741220458 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0671552450083 0.0668466124924 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.536592528493 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145623949885 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706457860481 0.134430193775 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515046373414 0.0742795772207 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.193223125854 0.324371583561 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.12515684761 0.0638462369009 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102265901326 0.228012699653 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474707268957 0.058150111329 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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