Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Few folks consider that big, pretty structures are relevant for a town , whilist others feel that developing educational units and healthcare home should be funded. I shall look at both views and give my views on it.
On the one hand, there are few reasons for why gigantic and super framework are important for a city . Firstly, it gives better impression on people to live in. Secondly, tourism will get promoted and encouraged by this. Thirdly, vast multistoreyed buildings can accomodate more no. Of people by that prices of land will decreased. Finally, large and impressive buildings make city better place for everyone.
On the other hand, along with buildings, schools and hospitals are also important. Better schools will help children to learn in more effective way. To illustrate, high quality emenities in schools will connect children to mordern world. Clininc enhancement will able to treat humans in an convenient way, more equipments would be available to treat every kind of diseases.
To sum up, my view is both are necessary in its own way buildings,schools and hospitals . This all are in favour of better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...retty structures are relevant for a town , whilist others feel that developing edu...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...super framework are important for a city . Firstly, it gives better impression on ...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
.... Of people by that prices of land will decreased. Finally, large and impressive building...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an convenient way" with adverb for "convenient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...c enhancement will able to treat humans in an convenient way, more equipments would be available to ...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nhancement will able to treat humans in an convenient way, more equipments would b...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , schools
...h are necessary in its own way buildings,schools and hospitals . This all are in favour ...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... own way buildings,schools and hospitals . This all are in favour of better life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'kind of', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238317757009 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.140186915888 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.130841121495 0.0946595960268 138% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0327102803738 0.0501214627716 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0280373831776 0.0437548338989 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11214953271 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0233644859813 0.0403226058552 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81611737376 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327102803738 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00467289719626 0.00163938923432 285% => OK
Determiners: 0.0654205607477 0.0861772015684 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0420560747664 0.021408717616 196% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00467289719626 0.011925033212 39% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1137.0 1933.35771543 59% => OK
No of words: 189.0 316.048096192 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01587301587 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20517956788 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26455026455 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206349206349 0.203846283523 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15873015873 0.137316102897 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81611737376 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.037074148 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687830687831 0.56093040696 123% => OK
Word variations: 76.0140286381 60.7387585426 125% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.5 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7143613801 49.517814964 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2142857143 127.492653851 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 39.955026455 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.86046511628 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342797310448 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0732122484568 0.102741220458 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0862623697759 0.0668466124924 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.486825285952 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162522859095 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118061335569 0.134430193775 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929023072214 0.0742795772207 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.220023708721 0.324371583561 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0503863484128 0.0638462369009 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213013760943 0.228012699653 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852860866962 0.058150111329 147% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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