You forgot something important on the bus you traveled on. Write a letter to the bus company and say
- Describe what you are looking for.
- You phoned the company before, but their response didn’t help you (explain why).
- What do you want the manager to do about it?
I am writing in regards to losing my bag on one of your bus last week on 19th of July.
On that day, I had a meeting so apart from my shoulder bag I carried a hand bag too. It is a black leather ones which has a red mark in front of. All of my papers work were inside it and I really need them, without them I am in danger of losing my job.
When I realized I missed my bag, I immediately called your company and talked with one of your receptionist. He told me to go to the central station and looking for mission object department, however, whenever I went there, I realized this department w...
- Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss advantages and disadvantages. Give your opinion. 47
- You borrowed a tour guide book from your friend which was very useful. Write a letter and say- Why was it helpful for you?- When will you return this book?- Thank him/her for this guide book. 53
- Doctors say that many people have health problems due to lack of physical activity. What is your opinion on this issue? What might be the reasons for this? What are the ways to improve the situation? 54
- You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say- what was the item- why it was important that you get it immediately- what you suggest the company shoul 93
- Nowadays many people go shopping in their free time Shopping has replaced many other activities that people choose as their hobby What are the reasons for this Is this a positive or negative development 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
I am writing in regards to losing my bag on one of your bus last w...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...d a hand bag too. It is a black leather ones which has a red mark in front of. All o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'apart from']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.159090909091 0.220444632235 72% => OK
Verbs: 0.186363636364 0.167888034529 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05 0.0606518309736 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0636363636364 0.0506257000042 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.186363636364 0.118615021944 157% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109090909091 0.107062808482 102% => OK
Participles: 0.05 0.041066498444 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57129714747 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0318181818182 0.0385302599488 83% => OK
Particles: 0.00454545454545 0.00132118243153 344% => OK
Determiners: 0.05 0.0714148451538 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00909090909091 0.0191574576366 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0272727272727 0.00930345855455 293% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1067.0 1141.60824742 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.134020619 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30845771144 5.53046319177 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78085437643 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.273631840796 0.284621296913 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.199004975124 0.211203875043 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0945273631841 0.133321485273 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0646766169154 0.0843313296314 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57129714747 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646766169154 0.622163163488 104% => OK
Word variations: 67.1577151704 62.8969750728 107% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1 16.4300151701 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0894237576 44.7399317507 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.7 90.9928171075 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.4300151701 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.613754768223 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 40.0004975124 37.5504026743 107% => OK
Elegance: 0.729166666667 1.13073093955 64% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187986659122 0.331212695627 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10030685777 0.0927372745006 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0657394675378 0.0736520305886 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.637574927541 0.579516596996 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.231255185234 0.180689518051 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787985740483 0.122183219658 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661603220364 0.0765303033291 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.183395826828 0.211926503985 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.084239172634 0.0737400523855 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122340415125 0.203819188451 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692979576008 0.067151250289 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.45360824742 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.48453608247 337% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.73195876289 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 1.03092783505 485% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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