There is no doubt that food is important for people's survive. It support our body with nutritious, vitamins and miners required for body metabolism. Unfortunatly nowaday's, food has become less healthier than it was in the past. Food contains a tremendous amonunt addetives that pose a significant risk on people's vital organs.
Now a days food is unhealthy due to large amount of additives. For example, While the world health organization suggest that average sugar intake should not exceed 32 grams per day, Soda cans contains at least 40 grams of sugar. Given that some people drink two or three Soda cans per day, they have exceeded the world health organization's advice. As areult, people suffer from health complication like high blood sugar and heart problems.
In addition to the previous point, food has become less nutrition. Most of the sadawitches and fast food providers neglect the importance of vegetebles and vitamies in their food preparation. By focusing only on taste and looks, thier food provides limted or no nutrition to their comsumer. Take Mcdonalds as a vivd example. provid that Mcdonalds serve a wide varities of Hamburger sandawitches that made only from burger, chees and bread, they not only provides no nutritious, but also it full of saturated fats and carbs. Poeple who eat too much from Mcdonalds are harming their body.
Finally, food has become more process than ever before. WIth the current fast pace life, people have no time to prepared and cook healthy food. As a result, people started to depend more on prepackaged food like frozen pizza, frozen lunch and so on. Even though people who buy prepackaged food safe some time, their food is not organic. Which means that they are not getting a healthy food from earth. Prepackaged food might contain preservatives and gentic modified ingrediants. Which can seriously harm people's body.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that even though nowaday's food are delcious and easy to prepar, their ingrediants can pose a significant risk on people's internal organs. Therefore I agree that food has become less healthier than before.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: It support our body with nutritious, vitamins and miners required for body metabolism.
Description: The fragment It support our is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace support with verb, past tense
Sentence: For example, While the world health organization suggest that average sugar intake should not exceed 32 grams per day, Soda cans contains at least 40 grams of sugar.
Description: The fragment organization suggest that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace suggest with verb, past tense
they not only provides no nutritious, but also it full of saturated fats
Description: 'Not only...but also' is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: WIth the current fast pace life, people have no time to prepared and cook healthy food.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and prepared
Sentence: Food contains a tremendous amonunt addetives that pose a significant risk on people's vital organs.
Error: amonunt Suggestion: amount
Error: addetives Suggestion: additives
Sentence: As areult, people suffer from health complication like high blood sugar and heart problems.
Error: areult Suggestion: art
Sentence: Most of the sadawitches and fast food providers neglect the importance of vegetebles and vitamies in their food preparation.
Error: vitamies Suggestion: varies
Error: sadawitches Suggestion: switches
Error: vegetebles Suggestion: vegetables
Sentence: By focusing only on taste and looks, thier food provides limted or no nutrition to their comsumer.
Error: comsumer Suggestion: consumer
Error: limted Suggestion: limited
Error: thier Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Take Mcdonalds as a vivd example. provid that Mcdonalds serve a wide varities of Hamburger sandawitches that made only from burger, chees and bread, they not only provides no nutritious, but also it full of saturated fats and carbs.
Error: vivd Suggestion: vied
Error: varities Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: chees Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: sandawitches Suggestion: sandwiches
Error: provid Suggestion: proved
Sentence: Prepackaged food might contain preservatives and gentic modified ingrediants.
Error: ingrediants Suggestion: ingredients
Error: gentic Suggestion: genetic
Sentence: As a conclusion, we can safely say that even though nowaday's food are delcious and easy to prepar, their ingrediants can pose a significant risk on people's internal organs.
Error: ingrediants Suggestion: ingredients
Error: delcious Suggestion: delicious
Error: prepar Suggestion: prepare
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 18 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 18 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 349 350
No. of Characters: 1730 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.322 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.957 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.553 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.864 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.479 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.318 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.517 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...d is important for peoples survive. It support our body with nutritious, vitamins and ...
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Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less healthy'?
Suggestion: less healthy
... Unfortunatly nowadays, food has become less healthier than it was in the past. Food contains ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...past. Food contains a tremendous amonunt addetives that pose a significant risk o...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...icant risk on peoples vital organs. Now a days food is unhealthy due to large amount o...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...risk on peoples vital organs. Now a days food is unhealthy due to large amount o...
^^^^
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Provid
...umer. Take Mcdonalds as a vivd example. provid that Mcdonalds serve a wide varities of...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fulls'?
Suggestion: fulls
...nly provides no nutritious, but also it full of saturated fats and carbs. Poeple wh...
^^^^
Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e some time, their food is not organic. Which means that they are not getting a healt...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 481, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...atives and gentic modified ingrediants. Which can seriously harm peoples body. As ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ficant risk on peoples internal organs. Therefore I agree that food has become less healt...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less healthy'?
Suggestion: less healthy
... Therefore I agree that food has become less healthier than before.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'at least', 'for example', 'in addition', 'no doubt', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.284615384615 0.229887763892 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.148717948718 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107692307692 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0512820512821 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0358974358974 0.0685040099705 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120512820513 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0307692307692 0.0351676179071 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60810155904 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0153846153846 0.0309702414327 50% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0564102564103 0.0887237588012 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0128205128205 0.0209618222197 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0128205128205 0.0139019557991 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2133.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 349.0 408.028673835 86% => OK
Chars per words: 6.111747851 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355300859599 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255014326648 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180515759312 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117478510029 0.112833075102 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60810155904 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578796561605 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 65.5789353702 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1739130435 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6602874954 48.84282405 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7391304348 120.699889404 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1739130435 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.6753457082 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.84782608696 1.45489161554 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229896982944 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0702024087079 0.103427244359 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0677697352877 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.435849116191 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144440058732 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739865035557 0.114077575197 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717331537747 0.0781384742642 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.211978115075 0.336927656856 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0834905311925 0.067059652881 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135769376922 0.210909579961 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379939721503 0.0618886996521 61% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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