Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than they do similiar taskes all day long.
Uses specific reasons and examples to illustrate your ideas.
There is no doubt that people have different personalties and different prefrances. While some people prefer to do similer wark tasks everyday, others consider it very boring and discouraging. In my point of view, people should do what ever they want at work in order to feel more satisfied. The basis of my views is as the follow.
In their endeavor to their success, people sometimes neglect the true meaning fo work. They starts to obey their manger instracture and their boss rules. As a result, they started to work under immense pressure and make mistakes. For example, workers who prefer to work on same task everyday are less likely to loose their focus if they have given different tasks through out the day. Instead they tend to do their utmost if they are asked to work on the same work tasks everyday. Geving workers the option to focus on one task or deal with different tasks over the day, will definlately have a great effect on workers preformance.
On the other hand, there is no denying that preforming different tasks through warkday is more entertaining. Since working for the same work tasks evey single day sound boring to some workers. People like chance and the only way to achieve that is through implementing different tasks per day. For example, pharmacy workers can work on drug preperation inside the pharmacy and delivering medication to homes at the same time. Working outside the pharmacy have some advantages like enjoing weather and the sun, While they do not enjoy this privilage inside the pharmacy. Giving them the option to deliver medication outside the pharmacy will refresh their mind and help them to endure their work load and tasks.
As a conclusion, we should not let work load and work stress to divert us from way that we like to do our daily work. To achieve their ultmaite goles people should not save any efforts to enjoy their work. Being passionate to work is the cornor stone for people future success.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: They starts to obey their manger instracture and their boss rules.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to They and starts
to loose their focus
to lose their focus
Sentence: There is no doubt that people have different personalties and different prefrances.
Error: prefrances Suggestion: preferences
Sentence: While some people prefer to do similer wark tasks everyday, others consider it very boring and discouraging.
Error: wark Suggestion: work
Error: similer Suggestion: similar
Sentence: In their endeavor to their success, people sometimes neglect the true meaning fo work.
Error: fo Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: They starts to obey their manger instracture and their boss rules.
Error: instracture Suggestion: instructive
Sentence: Geving workers the option to focus on one task or deal with different tasks over the day, will definlately have a great effect on workers preformance.
Error: definlately Suggestion: definitely
Error: preformance Suggestion: performance
Sentence: On the other hand, there is no denying that preforming different tasks through warkday is more entertaining.
Error: preforming Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: warkday Suggestion: ward
Sentence: Since working for the same work tasks evey single day sound boring to some workers.
Error: evey Suggestion: ever
Sentence: For example, pharmacy workers can work on drug preperation inside the pharmacy and delivering medication to homes at the same time.
Error: preperation Suggestion: preparation
Sentence: Working outside the pharmacy have some advantages like enjoing weather and the sun, While they do not enjoy this privilage inside the pharmacy.
Error: enjoing Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: privilage Suggestion: privilege
Sentence: To achieve their ultmaite goles people should not save any efforts to enjoy their work.
Error: goles Suggestion: goes
Error: ultmaite Suggestion: ultimate
Sentence: Being passionate to work is the cornor stone for people future success.
Error: cornor Suggestion: corner
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 15 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 15 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 338 350
No. of Characters: 1586 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.288 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.692 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.301 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 104 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.789 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.386 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.331 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.511 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... people prefer to do similer wark tasks everyday, others consider it very boring and dis...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... satisfied. The basis of my views is as the follow. In their endeavor to their success,...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
... neglect the true meaning fo work. They starts to obey their manger instracture and th...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...workers who prefer to work on same task everyday are less likely to loose their focus if...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...n same task everyday are less likely to loose their focus if they have given differen...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ocus if they have given different tasks through out the day. Instead they tend to do their ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...en different tasks through out the day. Instead they tend to do their utmost if they ar...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...re asked to work on the same work tasks everyday. Geving workers the option to focus on ...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267029972752 0.229887763892 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.171662125341 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0735694822888 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0272479564033 0.046263068375 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0708446866485 0.0685040099705 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117166212534 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0381471389646 0.0351676179071 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.3848374513 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0544959128065 0.0309702414327 176% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0790190735695 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016348773842 0.0209618222197 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00544959128065 0.0139019557991 39% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1961.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 338.0 408.028673835 83% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80177514793 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313609467456 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.210059171598 0.251872472559 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127218934911 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.085798816568 0.112833075102 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3848374513 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 53.9259170014 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7894736842 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3463844155 48.84282405 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.210526316 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.644075263715 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 38.795390844 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.56565656566 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329585184767 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135481154862 0.103427244359 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0899998233683 0.0752933317313 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526992924772 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116216982192 0.151897553556 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133584694388 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522701198985 0.0781384742642 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.347388988622 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0831109344352 0.067059652881 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231215270033 0.210909579961 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636027704938 0.0618886996521 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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