As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
As we know today technology is growing day by day . on each and every day new inventions are take place. because of this all invention human are mostly depended on this.we mostly use technology for any simple purposes after knowing that we can do that work more effectively but we chose technology over our mind . Technology stops human for thinking or for any kind of physical activity.
Firstly we know that in now days many new invention are there like calculator,internet,mobile phones,and many other,We should agree with this point that technology have many advantages but in other side it also have many disadvantages. we know that because of calculator human stop thinking or calculating any maths problem , which stop progress of human being,As we know because of internet we can easily fulfill our all needs we get all information in 2 or 3 second.
we know that in this all advantages there are many other illegal activities are running. youth of our nation is prevaricate.because of internet. there are many social media like watsup , facebook.hike etc.. this all activities dissemble our youth and we spoil future of our country.
apart from many disadvantages we know that because of internet or social media we save lots of our time and we can consume it on other important work. we also connect with many of our friends or family members or even with outsiders of country, we should thankful to the internet that we can easily our all task with the use of this service.
at the end we can conclude this its only depend on human how to use technology and in what extend we have to use it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As we know today technology is growing day...
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Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...w today technology is growing day by day . on each and every day new inventions ar...
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Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...oday technology is growing day by day . on each and every day new inventions are t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...very day new inventions are take place. because of this all invention human are mostly ...
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Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ly but we chose technology over our mind . Technology stops human for thinking or ...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... Firstly we know that in now days many new invention are there like calculator,internet,mobi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , internet
... new invention are there like calculator,internet,mobile phones,and many other,We should ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...e like calculator,internet,mobile phones,and many other,We should agree with this po...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , We
...or,internet,mobile phones,and many other,We should agree with this point that techn...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ny advantages but in other side it also have many disadvantages. we know that becaus...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...r side it also have many disadvantages. we know that because of calculator human s...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'maths'' or 'math's'?
Suggestion: maths'; math's
... human stop thinking or calculating any maths problem , which stop progress of human ...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hinking or calculating any maths problem , which stop progress of human being,As w...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , As
...lem , which stop progress of human being,As we know because of internet we can easi...
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Suggestion: We
...et all information in 2 or 3 second. we know that in this all advantages there ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Youth
...y other illegal activities are running. youth of our nation is prevaricate.because of...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prevaricated'.
Suggestion: prevaricated
...ies are running. youth of our nation is prevaricate.because of internet. there are many soc...
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Suggestion: There
...ion is prevaricate.because of internet. there are many social media like watsup , fac...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... there are many social media like watsup , facebook.hike etc.. this all activities...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...al media like watsup , facebook.hike etc.. this all activities dissemble our youth...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...media like watsup , facebook.hike etc.. this all activities dissemble our youth and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivities dissemble our youth and we spoil future of our country. apart from man...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apart
...and we spoil future of our country. apart from many disadvantages we know that be...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...can consume it on other important work. we also connect with many of our friends o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...task with the use of this service. at the end we can conclude this its only d...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'second', 'so', 'apart from', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207920792079 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.145214521452 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0990099009901 0.0880659088768 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046204620462 0.0497285424764 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.102310231023 0.0444667217837 230% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.158415841584 0.12292977631 129% => OK
Participles: 0.019801980198 0.0406280797675 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.96572009795 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00990099009901 0.030933414821 32% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0726072607261 0.0997080785238 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.023102310231 0.0249443105267 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013201320132 0.0148568991511 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1615.0 2732.02544248 59% => OK
No of words: 282.0 452.878318584 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72695035461 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.27304964539 0.366273622748 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216312056738 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159574468085 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0992907801418 0.132149295362 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96572009795 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 219.290929204 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489361702128 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 47.3055278939 55.4138127331 85% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5 23.380412469 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.459246957 59.4972553346 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 141.124799967 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.380412469 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.21349557522 480% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.1312056738 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.31460674157 1.64882698954 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143230514427 0.391690518653 37% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.158355492904 0.123202303941 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0874927379869 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.638872160706 0.547984918172 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.202854329539 0.149214159877 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737679875769 0.161403998019 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434641127921 0.0892212321368 49% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33928589186 0.385218514788 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0643755054708 0.0692045440612 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106276533893 0.275328986314 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052143157164 0.0653680567796 80% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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