Nation should require all of student s to study same curriculam untill they enter the college.
This isuue is main concern with the equality in the education system. As we know that in this era study is the most essential thing, by persuiate something we can be successful in our life. we know that in some villages some people can't afford the the fees of the school,so we have to first resolving this isuue by this we can bring equality in the education system. There are many NGO's are working for the poor people who can not give education facility to their children.
As we know that the childhood is the best part among all the journey of life so we have to spend that childhood in livelyness. If nation will give all students to study the same national curriculum untill they enter in the college will lead the progess of the nation. Because we know that in villages and city ,there is a huge difference between the education system and becuase of this the people who lives in village not facillate by morden educational facilities and which is the main isuue should be resolved by goverment. I totally agree with this point that nation should require all of its students to study the same curriculam untill they enter the college.
However we know that in childhood all the child have great mental sharpness , they will remember all things in that age. If we dont provide equality in education system, it will impact great effect on their mind or as well as in the thinking. Becuase of this problem nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculam untill they enter the college becuase in that age children will understand all the situation which will not prevaricate them. But if we will not provide equality in eduacation system it will prevaricate the children and it will lead them to doing many illegal activites and many other criminal activites.
As per the indian goverment record there are 30% children in villages are not facillate by the education, they will not even get the basic education system.Because of that being a good humanbeing we have to resolve this isuue and put the main focus on equality of education system.
Finally, i fully agree with this statement and it will lead to nation in success and only sucess. As we know that that "CHILDREN ARE THE FUTURE OF THE NATION" we have to provide same facility to all the children becuase it will decide the future of any nation. By solving this issue we bring equality in the education system which is very necessary thing and also we have to provide free education facilites for the indignant people.By doing this nation will not face any kind of issue.
- Nation should require all of student s to study same curriculam untill they enter the college. 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...thing we can be successful in our life. we know that in some villages some people ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
... know that in some villages some people cant afford the the fees of the school,so we...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...n some villages some people cant afford the the fees of the school,so we have to first ...
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Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...n some villages some people cant afford the the fees of the school,so we have to first ...
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Suggestion: , so
...e cant afford the the fees of the school,so we have to first resolving this isuue b...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to spend that childhood in livelyness. If nation will give all students to study ...
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...ecause we know that in villages and city ,there is a huge difference between the e...
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Suggestion: However,
...culam untill they enter the college. However we know that in childhood all the child...
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...ll the child have great mental sharpness , they will remember all things in that a...
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Suggestion: don't
... remember all things in that age. If we dont provide equality in education system, i...
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Suggestion: Because
...not even get the basic education system.Because of that being a good humanbeing we have...
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Suggestion: focus
... have to resolve this isuue and put the main focus on equality of education system. Fin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... in success and only sucess. As we know that that 'CHILDREN ARE THE FUTURE OF THE NA...
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Suggestion: By
...tion facilites for the indignant people.By doing this nation will not face any kin...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'kind of', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24173553719 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.140495867769 0.157235817809 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0723140495868 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0413223140496 0.0497285424764 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0702479338843 0.0444667217837 158% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134297520661 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0144628099174 0.0406280797675 36% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.48051362718 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0247933884298 0.030933414821 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.128099173554 0.0997080785238 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0392561983471 0.0249443105267 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0123966942149 0.0148568991511 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2584.0 2732.02544248 95% => OK
No of words: 454.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69162995595 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303964757709 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235682819383 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162995594714 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107929515419 0.132149295362 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48051362718 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.400881057269 0.48968727796 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.9371007472 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 28.375 23.380412469 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2802862995 59.4972553346 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.5 141.124799967 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.375 23.380412469 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.674092028746 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.9432819383 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.54918032787 1.64882698954 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346923888151 0.391690518653 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134227431112 0.123202303941 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0542204172479 0.077325440228 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.640936148952 0.547984918172 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138509984368 0.149214159877 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184310034829 0.161403998019 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187191308244 0.0892212321368 210% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.48458730095 0.385218514788 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0801082959234 0.0692045440612 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246824993107 0.275328986314 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126997059123 0.0653680567796 194% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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