Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
Our appearances is a very important part of our lives. Our appearance determines what people think about us. Some people believe that the clothes that we wear influence the way we behave, others disagree. In my opinion, they do influence our behaviour for two important reasons.
The main reason is that we always put on different clothes in different situations and our appearance definitely is influenced by our condition and the place that we are going. If we want to be funny, we use colorful and funny clothes and if we want to be sad and we want everyone knows that we are unhappy, we put on dark clothes. For example, in my country, many religious people put on black clothes when a sacred one is dead and everyone knows that they are unhappy because of their martyrdom. As you can see, it is very important to choose what you were because many people that do not know you decide about your personality by your appearances.
Another reason is that our clothes influence the way people treat us and the way that they treat us affect our behavior. For example, we put on convenient clothes when we are with our friends but we use different and more formal clothes when we are at work. I remember that when I went to my friend's party after work and I did not have enough time to go home and change my clothes. So, I just went there after work with my official clothes. I remember that day was awful because I visited some of my friends after years and they acted really different with me and it made me feel uncomfortable and I just could not be funny. I just sat all that night and make smile to other people. This example taught me that my appearance really influences my behavior because it affects the way other people behave toward me.
In sum, whether our clothing influence the way other people act or the way also we act others, what you wear has a strong effect on your behavior. So, it is important that we all choose what we wear very carefully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
... and change my clothes. So, I just went there after work with my official clothes. I rememb...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'for example', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.182519280206 0.229887763892 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.185089974293 0.158761421928 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0796915167095 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0514138817481 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.169665809769 0.0685040099705 248% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118251928021 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.00514138817481 0.0351676179071 15% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.42593370086 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0154241645244 0.0309702414327 50% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0488431876607 0.0887237588012 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00514138817481 0.0209618222197 25% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0231362467866 0.0139019557991 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1960.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 360.0 408.028673835 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288888888889 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205555555556 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138888888889 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0916666666667 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42593370086 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.2693816268 59.2087087015 78% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1764705882 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7584829871 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.294117647 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.644075263715 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 41.7320261438 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 0.753164556962 1.45489161554 52% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303669688622 0.300154397459 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132425645924 0.103427244359 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0696171239279 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49351762639 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118457858071 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119009843165 0.114077575197 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794933095638 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.319254868722 0.336927656856 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10356313139 0.067059652881 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213303907335 0.210909579961 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210433564139 0.0618886996521 34% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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