Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Everyday, media reports raft of problems in modern society: racism, non-equality, transgender issue, terrorist attack, etc. The author's claim is that many of stated problems cannot be solved by laws and legal system. He supports his argument by reasoning that people's heart or minds are immutable by laws. Indeed, modern society laws or legal system does not have resolutions for myriad problems it faces, however, I disagree on generalizing the reasoning for the claim. Further, not all problem's resolutions needs change in minds of people.
Modern society has evolved over the past centuries by amending or framing new laws and policies to counter attack the problems it faces. For example, abolishing slavery or equality for all or providing basic necessity of education for all citizens.
Abraham Lincoln stated "All men are equal" and established law to abolish slavery. Although the law was established decades back, proponents may claim that even today they see racism in United States of America. However, in reality, considering statistics to find number of people who are getting discriminated over the decades, it is clearly observable that the racism is declining. This implies, some laws needs its time to inculcate among citizens' mind and heart to slowly bring the change.
On the other hand, laws like equal opportunity for all students irrespective of caste, creed, place,etc to pursue education saw an immediate impact. The law provided platform for universities to improve education standards and assisted in developing economy of United States of America without needing any or slight change in minds of people.
To conclude, it is true that it is hard to change the people's mind or heart but it is not impossible by adding laws. Also, law on equality for education proves that not all laws needs change in people's heart or minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
Everyday, media reports raft of problems in mode...
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Line 8, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ents irrespective of caste, creed, place,etc to pursue education saw an immediate im...
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Line 10, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...t is true that it is hard to change the peoples mind or heart but it is not impossible ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.30523255814 0.240241500013 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.162790697674 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0639534883721 0.0880659088768 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0377906976744 0.0497285424764 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.031976744186 0.0444667217837 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130813953488 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0494186046512 0.0406280797675 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71693796064 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261627906977 0.030933414821 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00290697674419 0.0016655270985 175% => OK
Determiners: 0.0639534883721 0.0997080785238 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00581395348837 0.0249443105267 23% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00290697674419 0.0148568991511 20% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1877.0 2732.02544248 69% => OK
No of words: 299.0 452.878318584 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27759197324 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.438127090301 0.366273622748 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.324414715719 0.280924506359 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224080267559 0.200843997647 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130434782609 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71693796064 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57525083612 0.48968727796 117% => OK
Word variations: 61.5730634775 55.4138127331 111% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9333333333 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.041791719 59.4972553346 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.133333333 141.124799967 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.674092028746 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 52.3748049052 51.4728631049 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.0875 1.64882698954 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45282192008 0.391690518653 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101584182058 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0487754237661 0.077325440228 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.54713292549 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128235759217 0.149214159877 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177583447231 0.161403998019 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988514204609 0.0892212321368 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.23669328869 0.385218514788 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0662373300411 0.0692045440612 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278040164002 0.275328986314 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856952242088 0.0653680567796 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.66592920354 218% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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