It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
I my point of view, it definitely sounds a good idea to work for three days with long hours instead of five days with shorter hours. In this situation, I have more free hours to spend for myself and my social activities, moreover as a mother I can spend more hours with my kids and at last it is more cost effective because, I spend just for three day for transportations and less for babysitting.
First of all, if I work for three days a week, I will have 4 days off. It is a good opportunity to spend these days for my social activities or spend it for myself. For example, I can go outside and have meeting with my old classmate that we do not meet each other for long times. On the other hands, five day a week schedule for jobs makes me tired and with this heavy program, I would not be able to do any social activity. So, this condition provides me more free hours.
Moreover, I am the mother of two kids that I responsible of them. I have to check their tasks and have my control on them; working for three days makes it easy. I can spend more hours with them, and check older son`s education process. I can easily attend to their school`s meeting, Which by program of working for five days a weeks it is difficult to handle all of this responsibilities.
Finally, I do not have any car and I use the public transportation. In this way, if I work for 3 days a week I will spend less. Moreover, I ask for babysitting to take care of my younger son. In this situation, she will work for three days a week, which I spend just for three days instead of five days and it is too cost-effective.
In conclusion, based on my personality and responsibility working for three days a week is better. Moreover, it is cost effective too so I have that opportunity to earn more money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eck older son's education process. I can easily attend to their school'...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a week' or simply 'weeks'?
Suggestion: a week; weeks
...ich by program of working for five days a weeks it is difficult to handle all of this r...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... weeks it is difficult to handle all of this responsibilities. Finally, I do not ha...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.194300518135 0.229887763892 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.126943005181 0.158761421928 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0906735751295 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.059585492228 0.046263068375 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.119170984456 0.0685040099705 174% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.124352331606 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0129533678756 0.0351676179071 37% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.70280355535 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233160621762 0.0309702414327 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0621761658031 0.0887237588012 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.020725388601 0.0209618222197 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00259067357513 0.0139019557991 19% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1791.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 340.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26764705882 5.86048508987 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.197058823529 0.338922669872 58% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.15 0.251872472559 60% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.111764705882 0.174417080927 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0852941176471 0.112833075102 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70280355535 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438235294118 0.524397521467 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.0339920578 59.2087087015 74% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1586175756 48.84282405 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.352941176 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.644075263715 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 35.0 45.7405998639 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.08474576271 1.45489161554 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406252776628 0.300154397459 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0961035693282 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.080748003599 0.0752933317313 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515365632721 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162308835565 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166147571353 0.114077575197 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936984661079 0.0781384742642 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.375773552504 0.336927656856 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0836701829524 0.067059652881 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291111319269 0.210909579961 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501278797537 0.0618886996521 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.