A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.
In modern era, Universities establish research centers in order to take nation to the next level. But, when it come to point that whether center for business research or agriculture research people are split in their opinions. Although, some people want a center for research in agriculture, I want a center for business research, because we have opportunity to take advantage and increase the growth of market.
First of all, Business research center most advantage is people learn economic information and gain experience about the marketing. People build skill like major data and analyses and also some educational opportunities such as webinar and seminar conducted by the U.S and foreign commercial service. Furthermore, increase the experience of the industrial people by business with international company so also improvement in productivity.
Second of all, Business research is entering to international market. People become aware of world’s need. No doubt, just concentrating on productivity is worthless, we should find a way to export our production such as agricultural goods, industrial production and creative project. For example, In India lots of good available which are export to other country and get more profit but due to the lack of knowledge, some product are not export in foreign country. In my country is many research center of agriculture but lack of business research center. Therefore, we should invest on business research.
In my opinion, My country is achieves more success and people get enormous experience and knowledge with the business research center. In addition, the grow marketing across India and improvement in infrastructure, transportation, and communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
... nation to the next level. But, when it come to point that whether center for busine...
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Line 2, column 267, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
... webinar and seminar conducted by the U.S and foreign commercial service. Further...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
...rt in foreign country. In my country is many research center of agriculture but lack of busin...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... business research center. In addition, the grow marketing across India and improvement ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in addition', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.345637583893 0.229887763892 150% => OK
Verbs: 0.0973154362416 0.158761421928 61% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0906040268456 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0302013422819 0.046263068375 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0302013422819 0.0685040099705 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130872483221 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0134228187919 0.0351676179071 38% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.16178930384 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0268456375839 0.0309702414327 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0570469798658 0.0887237588012 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010067114094 0.0209618222197 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00671140939597 0.0139019557991 48% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1716.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 262.0 408.028673835 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.54961832061 5.86048508987 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48200974243 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.458015267176 0.338922669872 135% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.351145038168 0.251872472559 139% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.286259541985 0.174417080927 164% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.171755725191 0.112833075102 152% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16178930384 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 55.1475639389 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7142857143 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5956048723 48.84282405 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 0.644075263715 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 53.8287895311 45.7405998639 118% => OK
Elegance: 3.10638297872 1.45489161554 214% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442710702363 0.300154397459 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134566939567 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0757053883427 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.556954348295 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155722233608 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191870459739 0.114077575197 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14383497417 0.0781384742642 184% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.253388237479 0.336927656856 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0169478791545 0.067059652881 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302079628848 0.210909579961 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157064374103 0.0618886996521 254% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.