A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.
Establishing a research center in a city can be a stepping-stone for that city to pave the way for improving the city and help it thrive. While some people are of the opinion that a research center for farming could be more beneficial for the county, others believe that a business research center has more advantages for their country. I—for one—subscribe to the latter on the ground that a scientific center for developing commercial affairs in the country has quite a few advantages namely, providing many jobs, making significant revenue for country, and help country thrive and keep the pace of world’s booming economic, to name but a few.
To begin with, with this economic recession which is commonplace in every society, making jobs in every country is a demanding task for governments. founding a business developing center can be source of making many jobs in society. With new businesses like startups that can develop through this center, enormous professions and job positions can be created and this would be best way to ameliorate this situation, in which there is no enough occupations for the young and unemployment is a major deficient for the country.
Second, business is the best way for a country to make money with least resources. More precisely, although, with developing agriculture more goods can be exported and sold in foreign countries but, it needs consuming of many resources in country like water resoureces that can have a destructive impact on the country future. With this in mind, consider the buiseness that doesn’t need too many resources and also can be considerably profitable for country.
Last but not least, the world economy is developing in an unprecedented rate and to keep up this pace countries should contrive new ways in their business methods. Researching in business novel approaches is the best way to assist country flourish and can compete with the rivals in global market. Take for instance, UAE that is developing in business methods and has a booming economic.
All in all, taken into account what was already mentioned, I do believe that a research center in the economic field would be a better option for our country than a developing center for farming on the ground that business research center can make many job positions, make a considerable amount of income for the country, and also can help the society thrive. Nowadays all countries are developing business centers and we need to compete with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'thrives'?
Suggestion: thrives
... way for improving the city and help it thrive. While some people are of the opinion t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Founding
...ry is a demanding task for governments. founding a business developing center can be sou...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...positions can be created and this would be best way to ameliorate this situation, in wh...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the least'.
Suggestion: with the least
...he best way for a country to make money with least resources. More precisely, although, wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05352798054 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84623074878 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469586374696 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.6436341626 48.9658058833 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.357142857 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3571428571 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354154478243 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147708196838 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122466199566 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223032172322 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132934009574 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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